Open Poetry #8 |
No Regrets |
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
We go through life...madly rushing here and there Never stopping to feel, never stopping to think There may be no tomorrow Til its too late And you have carelessly let slip away The things you hold most dear So if you only do one thing today Let it be to tell someone you care Dont let another moment pass And spend your life regretting That one missed chance That one lost love That friend you let slip away Life is too short for regrets |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Paula, I agree. Nice message. Sometimes we just rush through life with blinders on and miss so many good things. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi here I am again, You are right about your message in this poem, so much enjoyed thank you. Cerenity |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
You say it quite well here ... there is no mistaking any intent by the reader ... I wrote one ... not quite as clear as yours ... but I think we were on the same thought wave ....................... Labyrinth ~~~ Twilights' tendrils ... gently spreading through the shadows of our mind ~ Shadow warriors ... ever searching signs of passage that we find ~ Gentle tendrils ... slowly seeking passage to our land of lore ~ Turned away by guards patrolling defending still ... our open door ~~~ |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Wise, wise words you use here. Well done. Thanks for sharing this message. A good reminder. Take care. *Peace. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Eloise...you miss to many special things when you rush Cerenity...thanks for your kind words Rex Allen...I like that Rex Spitfire...thank you, sometimes we just have to be reminded |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
i was jotting some words down on this topic today didn't get very far...but I like yours. Great work.... Julie :) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
JulieAnn...thanks for reading this |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes it is |
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