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A summers eve
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A summers eve |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
The full moon shimmers and slivers of light creep gracefully across freshly watered grass Melting ice cubes clink merrily bobbing freely within a lemonade sea A perfect summer eve finds us nestled in wicker chairs your fingers feathered around mine The night breeze refreshing cool upon my skin your kiss a treasure warming my heart... I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
*Sighs* Magic, but down to earth magic here...a lovely poem about such a simple summer's eve. Beautiful work.  *Krista Knutson* "We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~ |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
nice poem,,,,,had to stop in and vote!! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Breathe~ So GOOD to see you back in here, gal. I love your poem. Don't stay gone so long, my friend ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Breathe~ Breathe in the air, For The night breeze refreshing cools upon your skin a kiss you treasure warming your heart... .... nice work, very nice... why haven't I read more from you before, I wonder! regards, sudhir |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
What a lovely moment! Your imagery was so beautiful and captured every sense. Wonderful work! |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Alwye...I surely could use a summers cool breeze right now...*pant*.Thank you so much!... JulieAnn...I appreciate your vote.. Marge...I feel like my life has been exploding for awhile now...but in a good way!! Thank you Marge...*hug*Sudhir lyer...what an unusual yet lovely name! I have been AWOL for awhile now... Never seems to be enough time anymore...Thank you for your kind words and the lovely verse... Butterflies_don't_cry...I'm hoping for another lovely moment tonight... Thank you...I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
How lovely and delicate this is...pass the lemonade.  |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Thank you Ms. Devine....though I thought you were drinking Mountain Dew these days!! *tosses a dollar into the ransom pot* I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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