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Color Me, Color You
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Color Me, Color You |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas 
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COLOR ME, COLOR YOU In the book where my dreams reside, I've colored you the way I saw you first, and in the shades I've seen between then and now. All the colors I've ever seen sparkle and gleam on this portrait I've made... that is, everything but Green. Green I've saved for me, whom I've colored beyond the brilliance of the aura surrounding you. Envious Green, for all who share your light. Green, fading to blue, for having to live with only my thoughts, yet Golden now, for having been touched, and grateful, for having known you at all. w.james beard, jr. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Good work, Jwesley. The use of colors is interesting. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
That must be one more special person. Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Jwesley,...this is beautiful,..it just floated it's way from the screen to my heart. Wow. Well done. *Peace. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Very nice ... a definite keeper  Rex}>{{{{o> |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Jwesley~ this is beautiful and sad. -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JWesley~ As one who is prone to color outside the lines ... I enjoyed sharing your coloring book. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In the book where my dreams reside, I've colored you the way I saw you first, and in the shades I've seen between then and now. All the colors I've ever seen sparkle and gleam on this portrait I've made... that is, everything but Green. Green I've saved for me, whom I've colored beyond the brilliance of the aura surrounding you. --------------- JW.. I absolutely ADORE this poem it is written so sweetly and sincerely just beautiful with the imagery of the colors and the gentle grace of the emotions. perfect..and my fav by you now wish you would post more often my friend take care, jm you can say baby baby can I hold you tonite maybe if I said the right words at the right time you'd be mine baby can I hold you tonite Tracy C |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
this is pleasurable to read, and has a lovely flow of imagry, i really liked it, Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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