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You Stole My Heart
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You Stole My Heart |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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You Stole My Heart ~*Marge Tindal*~ You stole my heart with just your smile You took it You kept it all this while It's not that I miss it but I'd just like to know do you intend to give it back or is it yours forever ? It beats just for you So keep it if you must The heart that you stole beats only with your trust Trust that you will keep it safely from all harm Tucked within your very own heart covered with your charm So, trusting that you like it not questioning why I won't even turn you in to the F.B.I. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Marge--can't say I blame the culprit--you are irresistable---cute, and a smile to start my day...thanks... |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
What I read between the lines speaks of the fact there is no crime, The words almost shout,, you gave it away this time!... Very Nice! jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
So cute, Marge...this poem steals my heart, and the last verse made me smile  ...Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Lovely, just lovely... regards, sudhir |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Beautiful, Marge!!! Is this your method of stealing other's hearts? Cos it working!!!!! Your words entwine and wrap themselves around my heart...then ya steal it!! That's the plot, isn't it?!!!  Love ya! Love and hugs, Lil' Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Marge~ I love it! The ending is sooooooo cute! I caouldn't help but giggle a little. You do have a way of stealing hearts yourself, my dear! You got mine! Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
So, trusting that you like it not questioning why I won't even turn you in to the F.B.I. a wonderful poem Marge. Really enjoyed. "but for the lovers, their arms Round the griefs of the ages, Who pay no praise or wages Nor heed my craft or art" Dylan Thomas. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Marge instead of the FBI you turned him in to the IBM and I love it "You stole my heart with just your smile you took it you kept it all this while." Well, Marge you steal my heart everytime you write. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
judging from all the hearts you have stole-- mine included-- it is you who should fear the FBI. Loved it. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ These lines are awesome my friend. They just say it all. The FBI part made me smile, thank you. Nice writing. It beats just for you So keep it if you must The heart that you stole beats only with your trust *HUGS* LW Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--If he doesn't take care of your heart, he has me to answer to...your heart is just too precious! Like your poem too |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Glad to give you a smile, hon. Prometheus~ Thank you ... FBI's Most Wanted ! Elizabeth~ Thank you so much. Sudhir~ Glad you liked. Lil' Lizzie~ Yep ! You're just too smart ... figured it out, did you ? Gotcha' ! TerryW~ Hello, love. So good to see you back. Missed you ! Brian~ Hope it gave you a chuckle. ETHome~ Clever ... You're a sweetie. MarkB~ Well ... I left a trail of 'fingerprints' all over their hearts ... should be an open and shut case ! LoneWolf~ You are just the greatest ! Martie~ Grrrrr ! My little protector ... thank you. Love you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is sweet, Marge! Very nice! Denise |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ this is CUTE! Loved the F.B.I. bit....CUTE!CUTE!CUTE! -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Great to see beautiful poems like this one. I remember when I first came to Passions in January ... most of the poems here were so sad ... good to see the change ... and your poems have come a long way I think toward helping the mood swing to happen Rex}>{{{{o> |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Marge, this one is delightful and uplifting. Enjoyed it as always. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hell, yea, I stole your heart I'm holding it for ransom What else can some old varmint do Who ain't too young or handsome? Ain't never stole a heart before I always been a loner But, through your pomes, I wanted you To be an organ donor! So if ya want it back A deal can be made. What other body parts you got That you would like to trade????  |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Hi Marge, This one just too cute!! Made me grin from ear to ear. Stole your smile, give it back!! Too cute! Ball's remark, hard one to follow, enjoyed his little ditty too. |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
I think you're wonderful....*smitten grin* Once again Marge...very nice... I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Think I will head off to bed for the evening with a smile on my face after reading a wonderful poem. |
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LittleCookie Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 55asheville,NC,UnitedStates |
This was truelly lively and funny,thanks for bringing me up! :*)Agile in love,while rooted in soul |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Appreciate the reply. SEA~ I'm delighted to tickle you ! Rex~ LOL ! Well, I remember your first post - 'Love Beyond Perception' - it was a tear-jerker ! I like to see a little humor too - but the best thing about Passion's is the variety of emotions on display. I just love it all ! Eloise~ Thank you, hon. Alle~ So glad to give you a smile. Breathe~ I'm glad to see you and to share a grin. Mike~ Thank you, my Kansas friend. LittleCookie~ Welcome to Passion's. Glad you enjoyed this. LOL !  For someone so handsome I'd gladly pay the ransom I'll make you a deal that to you should appeal ! A winsome set of hips or perhaps some luscious lips ! There's also a gorgeous set of gams that carry around all that I am. A variable shopping list of sorts to greet your organ needs .. but I just have to ask ya' You aren't bartering for my gluteus maximus ? Are you ? *Like I said ... we're nuts and enjoying every minute of it ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
That sounds like quite a package Of satisfying treats And I could get some snackage Mileage out of all those sweets! You are the Publix of my dreams Quite worthy of my ballad But gluteus maximus? To me that seems Like something on a salad!! yep, certifiably insane for sure |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
OMG the poem is fantastic but the follow up is beyond words |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ If you've got 'gluteus maximus' on your salad - that probably explains that 'stuff' growing in your refrigerator ! ! ! Either that or you're in the wrong 'Diner' and it's the Tomaine Tavern ! You are such a pleasure ! You know I luv ya' Paula~ Glad you enjoyed both the post and the humorous replies. That Balladeer is a riot, is he not ! Stay tuned ... we play off of one another constantly. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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