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This One Tear
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This One Tear |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
This one tear Is for you I hope you love again And that I do too This one tear Shows no happiness It prepares us both For the lonlieness This one tear Flows down my cheek It represents the love that We both seek This one tear Will dry up fast And when we meet again This tear will only be the past |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
one tear was very beautiful This one tear will dry up fast and when we meet again this tear will only be the past very nice enjoyed the flow was so easy |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Nikki, That one tear had quite a journey. Your words flowed as easily as I am sure that tear did. Great writing. Nice description. Lone Wolf Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nikki~ What a lovely description of a tear that has run it's course. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You have captured the moment and the sadness of our tears. James |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~nikki oh this is so lovely and yet so sad. you have captured the essence of a tear perfectly. beautiful poem. take care. amy  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Very nice poem....I hope the tears can meet again...good work... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Nikki~ Your poem...~This one Tear~ is absolutely beautiful. Well written little one Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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