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Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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missouri

0 posted 2000-06-26 10:01 PM


    The wind awakens me as outside
our window a storm builds
    Inside the  fires glow bathes you
in warm light
    Touching your face, touching your body,
as my hands long to do
    Reaching out I caress your face, fingers
finding your lips, and the kiss awaiting there
    The look in your eyes tells me there is a
storm in this room stronger than the one
raging outside
    Passion soars as I kiss you, mouth
hungry and hot
    You lay there, silent, like a big cat,
knowing what the sight of you does to me
    A smile playing about your lips, teasing
me, knowing I cant resist
    Thunder rumbles low, an echo of the
moans coming from my soul
    Hands and lips on sweat slick skin
lust overriding love
    Bodies locked in that age old rhythm
as we love through the storm swept night
    Then, sated, I drift off to sleep,
held close in your arms
    Dreaming the dream all over again


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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-06-26 10:13 PM


Dreaming the dream all over again
------------
WOW....
oh yea....looooove when it rains...
loooove it even better when it POURS ... LOL
very sensual and great storm imagery
as well as that "sweat slick skin" imagery  
excellent poem
jm



Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
2 posted 2000-06-26 10:40 PM


lovely ... I have to go now ... Let's see now where did my wife go ... Honey !!

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
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Blue Heaven
3 posted 2000-06-26 10:42 PM


Careful... the dream could turn wet!
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
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4 posted 2000-06-26 10:45 PM


Beautiful and passionate.


Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"



Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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missouri
5 posted 2000-07-01 11:39 AM


JM...thanks makes you look to the skies huh?

Rex Allen...hehehe

Jamie...and whats wrong with wet dreams?

Temptress...thank you so much

Diana Kessler
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since 2000-08-12
Posts 24
U.S.A.
6 posted 2000-08-13 02:47 PM


You really know how to express those passionate feelings within us all.
Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2000-09-01 06:51 PM


Sensual and romantic indeed...James
passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2005-02-20 12:35 PM


good write...I enjoyed
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