Open Poetry #8 |
The Storm Within |
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
The wind awakens me as outside our window a storm builds Inside the fires glow bathes you in warm light Touching your face, touching your body, as my hands long to do Reaching out I caress your face, fingers finding your lips, and the kiss awaiting there The look in your eyes tells me there is a storm in this room stronger than the one raging outside Passion soars as I kiss you, mouth hungry and hot You lay there, silent, like a big cat, knowing what the sight of you does to me A smile playing about your lips, teasing me, knowing I cant resist Thunder rumbles low, an echo of the moans coming from my soul Hands and lips on sweat slick skin lust overriding love Bodies locked in that age old rhythm as we love through the storm swept night Then, sated, I drift off to sleep, held close in your arms Dreaming the dream all over again |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Dreaming the dream all over again ------------ WOW.... oh yea....looooove when it rains... loooove it even better when it POURS ... LOL very sensual and great storm imagery as well as that "sweat slick skin" imagery excellent poem jm |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
lovely ... I have to go now ... Let's see now where did my wife go ... Honey !! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Careful... the dream could turn wet! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful and passionate. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
JM...thanks makes you look to the skies huh? Rex Allen...hehehe Jamie...and whats wrong with wet dreams? Temptress...thank you so much |
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Diana Kessler Junior Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 24U.S.A. |
You really know how to express those passionate feelings within us all. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sensual and romantic indeed...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write...I enjoyed |
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