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Eternal Love Of Soul Mates
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Eternal Love Of Soul Mates |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Eternal Love Of Soul Mates No love songs for us to listen to No midnight dance with me No more the warmth of your arms No more you writing me poetry Totally consumed With my reality Constantly yearning For you to hold me Struggling to breath As the tide starts rolling in Clinging to anything So our love can win Always aware Of the dangers up ahead But we listened to our hearts Didn’t listen to our head Now we’re faced with what we have And the memories of yesterday As the tide engulfs us now Consuming everything in its way But even a tide such as this No matter how powerful or rough Our love will always be There is no tide strong enough For I love you my soul mate As I know you love me And no matter where we are We will feel each other in our souls For the rest of eternity |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
kat- beautiful, *standing ovation* such sweet and honest emotion pouring from your pen and heart in this one! take care and continue to write please. i so enjoy your work! take care. amy  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kat~ I so enjoyed this. 'Our love will always be There is no tide strong enough' Lovely affirmation of the eternity of soulmates. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Amy thanks, I feel honered for that standing ovation. This is very close to my heart and It's very emotional for me. I'm happy you found it beautiful. Marge, thank-you. I do believe that love between Soul Mates is love like no other and it does last for eternity. I'm glad you enjoyed it. kat |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
I truly hope it isn't urequited love |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Very good..I wish I could forward this on over to mine.. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Prometheus, this is what everyone should be so lucky to find. It's the ever lasting love between Soul Mates. There is no connection stronger then that. Temptress, by all means. Don't just wish to forward it. Do it! Express yourself. Life is too short not to. I'm glad you enjoyed it. kat |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
all of ME and YOU Like a poem that flows The eternal LOVE of our souls Fly above all Whispering LOVE'S call Locked by our halo's Prettier then rainbows Two stars in the heavens Whitest LOVE pigeons Kiss in eternity Taste of purity All of ME and YOU I LOVE YOU |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
How very true Kat |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Kat, soulmates are hard to find. . . hope that you can always have yours around. . . Superb poem. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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star216 Junior Member
since 2000-06-26
Posts 11 |
Very, very beautiful poem. I just loved it. |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Wow! Insect thanks for that poem. It's the romantic side of you coming out. With all your funny one's in the past I failed to see this side of you. It's very beautiful insect, thank-you. Prometheus, yes I know it is. Very much so. kat |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Sven: Yes soul mates are very hard to find and when you do, you're one of the fortunate ones. I have found mine. Our circumstances prevent us from being together but even though we are apart we still feel eachother just as if we were together, which is incredible. So I feel blessed to know a love like that, even though I can't be physically with him that often. I still feel his warmth around me. I'm glad you really liked this one. Thanks Star, thanks! I'm happy that you loved it. kat |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
This touched me deeply, like you I'm far from my love for long periods, but she is always beside me, in everything I do. Beautiful poem Kat. Thankyou Olias |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Kat~ Such tenderness and warmth...a soulmate is hard to find, glad you found yours Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
For I love you my soul mate As I know you love me And no matter where we are We will feel each other in our souls For the rest of eternity ... Lovely, just too lovely... kat, I am glad you found your soulmate, and hope that you have the perfect relationship for eternity... regards, sudhir. Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Kat this is my goal to find my soulmate..you have fit it all together so nicely...wonderful thoughts and I hope also a reality for you. James |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Olias: It's nice to know that you feel your love with you even though she's not physically with you all the time. You have a special love Olias. I'm glad my poem touched you. Tracie: Thanks. I'm glad I found my soul mate also but circumstances prevent us from being together, but even with that we still have that connection. I'm happy that you found it tender and warm. Sudhir: Thank-you but no matter how happy I am that I found him, our circumstances prevent us from being together even though our love is so strong for eachother. No matter how far we may be from eachother I still feel his warmth daily and our souls will be connected for eternity. I'm happy you enjoyed it. James: I too hope that one day you are fortunate enough to find your soul mate for there is no love that is deeper then that of soul mates. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for your well wishes for me. kat |
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Dakota Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 125New York |
Sometimes together Sometimes apart You are forever Emblazened in my heart Wonderful Kat! Just wonderful !! Great writing ! |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Always together Never apart That's how it is For you live in my heart Dakota: I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks! kat |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
*joining Amy in the standing ovation* Well done Kat! To be able to say that your love and your best friend is one person is a truly wonderful thing  Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Eric, I don't know what to say other than thank-you so much for the standing ovation. I'm excited that you enjoyed my poem so much. kat |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
I loved it! Totally soulful! ~*~SCG~*~ |
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