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Heart's Lullaby
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Heart's Lullaby |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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I just woke up this morning, and for some reason, I had the line "as my heart sing's it lullaby" in my head, and this was the result. ~*HEART'S LULLABY*~ Lay your weary head upon my breast, my love and with care, I'll caress with a soft hand the lonely tears away, I'll breath a sigh of love into your waiting lungs, peace for dawn's light, a newfound hope for the beginning day, hold tight to faith, my love pleasure unending will come at last, lying enraptured in my arms, an unconditional love so tender, in cupid's desire in which we bask, place your head against my heart, as it speaks of words so true, run your fingers through my silken hair of chestnut, my love, like this, forevermore we will stay, just me and you, while entranced upon the winds of romance, our love shall be, as angels sing their symphony of delight for us, such beauty from above, lay your weary head upon my breast, explore my soul like a child, outside our window of dreams, touched by our bond, the moon in wonderment, very gently sighs, for, body and soul between two lovers has no bounds, listen closely, my love, do you hear it's whimsical sound? As my heart sings for you, it's soothing lullaby *By Melissa Honeybee* |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
and I am pleased to say that the result of that was simply an amazing beautiful piece of poetry... Melissa, I enjoyed this one for sure... Nice writing ... regards, sudhir Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lovely, Melissa~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
absolutely stunning. beautifully written. "An abyss that lasted creation A circus complete with all fools Foundations that lasted the ages Then ripped apart at their roots" joy division |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Mel! This was absolutely stunning! Seems your on a roll these days my friend! Keep 'em coming! Enjoyed this one immensly! Take care. Amy  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
"Outside our window of dreams,touched by our bond, the moon in wonderment sighs" I am in wonderment too, Once again in awe I stand, Surely angels guide your hand. You just get better and better Melissa Take care Olias |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Just beautiful, Melissa. That is a wonderful line you have. Nice writing!! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you everyone! I tell you, I love it here at Passions, this is my home away from home. And, isn't it strange how sometimes you spend months perfecting a poem, and it turns out to be okay and then out of the blue you think of a line and in 10 minutes you write a poem that is better than the one that took months to write! Maybe, I'm the only one who feels this way, but, I just wanted to share my take on one of life's little ironies on a poet Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautiflly captured. Here's hoping that I can wake in the morning feeling half as inspired as this. If so, you will see the results. Sweet awakenings OH talented one. Mark |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you so much Mark. I'm sure that it will happen to you one day and you'll write a great poem Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Melissa, it's amazing what the morning can bring isn't it?? Just wonderful my friend. . . simply wonderful. . . -------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
An outstanding hook to go with some very good lines! |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Melissa, this is soo wonderful...I love the entire idea and especially the last line. Gorgeous work here! *Krista Knutson* "Cherish your vision; Cherish your ideals; Cherish the music that stirs in your heart, the beauty that forms in your mind, the loveliness that drapes your purest thoughts. If you remain true to them, your world will at last be built." ~James Allen~ "We've made houses for hatred...it's time we made a place where people's souls may be seen and made safe"...~Jewel~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
WOW! this is simply awesome, I love it. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you everyone! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) This is so enchanting and beautiful Melissa, it sings a soft loving song, I loved it. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Melissa, i dont know how on earth i could have missed this...in MHO, this is simplt the best piece of poetry i have ever read from you..you certainly have some heart-tugging lines here...  keep up the good work |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you so much! It's odd how the morning can inspire you Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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