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Open Poetry #8

and bleeding in May...

jennie may*
Member

since 2000-06-17

Posts 122

0 posted 2000-06-24 11:41 PM

could it be a
trend
a sticky mess
a heart attack
my body
walking lifeless

could it be that
I am losing this
a battlefield
a war as delicate
as a kiss

make sure to
turn the other way
when you see me
bruised and broken

and bleeding in May

JulieAnn
Senior Member

since 2000-06-12

Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

1 posted 2000-06-25 01:15 AM

Very sad and dark I am not sure what to think of when I read htis...it leaves me pondering! But good none the less,,,,,,I liked it!

Julie :)

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

2 posted 2000-06-26 08:04 PM

Hi Jennie,

First of all welcome to passions I am very glad you found us, I think you will really enjoy it here. Secondly your poem is wonderful, yes sad but good work, If this is were you are right now in life I hope things get better, I think you will find a lot of answers here at passions just by reading the other work. But if nothing else it will give some comfort in reading others trials in life and no you are not alone in the world.

Nice to have you,

Cerenity

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