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Enchanted woman
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Enchanted woman |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin 
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Enchanted woman, you lure me in you capitvate all that I am Enchanted woman, your eyes filled with sin forgetting now just who I am Enchanted woman, you beckon to touch and learn without seeing a thing Enchanted woman, I'm drinking too much and courage is what it will bring Enchanted woman, your pouty red lips all glossed and making me think Enchanted woman, you're swaying your hips approaching, you're right on the brink Enchanted woman, your shiny dark hair so perfect with sensual scent Enchanted woman, your naughty girl stare you're succeeding to make me relent Enchanted woman, we're gonna remember what happens throughout this wild night Enchanted woman, I'm starting to render a picture my mom wont delight  < !signature-->Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. [This message has been edited by ThUnDeRkYsS (edited 06-24-2000).] |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
 at that last line...good work, Thunderkyss.Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Thank you Elizabeth  Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ThUnDeRkYsS~ Enjoyed the tempo of this one. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Thank you much Marge {{H}} |
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