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chance the wind |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Who could have known when I started down this path That you would be my journeys end. Yet here we are together at a place few ever reach Willing to dream willing to dare Willing to chance the wind for the joy we know is there So lets explore our world Lets explore each other lets chance the wind |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
oh i simply adored this! loved the title, and the poem supported it beautifully! excellent. take care. amy  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Aimster...thanks and I'm glad you liked the poem |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Paula~ So much said in so few words, how I loved this! It really is beautiful and gives the reader a sense of peace while reading it, wishing to find a love such as this, but, being happy for the person who already has. "Yet here we are together at a place few ever reach. Willing to dream willing to dare... Let's explore each other, let's chance the wind" What a beautiful love you speak of. I just love the motif of being lost upon the winds of love. Excellent piece! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
What a beautiful way of expressing love, Paula!! "Chance the Wind" is a wonderful title! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Melissa...some days the wind is all there is Esp...love is the greatest chance we ever undertake so it seemes appropriate |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Perfect title. I've got my compass in my heart(your heart) and am ready to explore. Besides the wind is such a wonderful way to travel. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 07-04-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Mark...come sail with me |
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