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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Slipping softly through the nights shadows Love comes knocking Let her in Let your heart be your guide Not your head Not your eyes Trust yourself Not your friends And when love knocks Let her in |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Paula, I'm in a moment of questioning myself. That poem made me smile and helped me to look towards the right path (I hope). "Let her in". I think I will. Well said. Trew. I have been to see the world. Tasted life at every turn. And all the time your face came back to haunt me. -Chris DeBurgh |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Let her in!  wunnderful! ~H |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
thanks nice to see i can touch someone |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hey, hey Paula...I want to marry you some day....oh, sorry your name reminded me of that old song. "And when Love knocks let her in." Creative writing with a nice touch of longing. James |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Paula~ Short but sweet...This was fantastic Trust yourself Not your friends And when love knocks Let her in...  Great Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
If Love should come knocking at my door, or even should she ring my bell, Someone please help me off the floor For by the sound I was felled... Very Nice Paula.. Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
James, If you only knew how often I heard that in my life...thanks for your kind words. Jamie, Love tends to surprise us all from time to time...knocking when you least expect it. Heres a hand up off that floor. X angel thanks Tracie sometimes it only takes a few words to say whats in you heart thanks |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Paula, Wonderful read, so much enjoyed, also I missed saying welcome to passions, so welcome and hope to read more of your work. Cerenity |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nicely said... We do have to open the door, don't we???...  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Cerenity and Nan...I missed saying thanks to you both...and yes that door wont open by itself never say never |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Cerenity and Nan...I missed saying thanks to you both...and yes that door wont open by itself never say never |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
sorry my computer has this annoying habit of eating my replies [This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 07-22-2000).] |
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