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Lost Bird. . .
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Lost Bird. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Have you lost your way gentle bird? Have you tried to sing, only to find that your voice can't be heard? Is it harder than you thought? Are you having trouble finding the things for which you've sought? You wanted to be let go, to fly free To go out into the world on your own and see what you could see If was easy for a little while But after time it felt like a marathon flying alone mile after long mile Remember you are always welcome in my arms To hold and take care of you and keep you safe from all harm Continue to fly gentle bird, fly so high above I will be here waiting and watching ready to give you warmth and love --------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Beautiful and delicate I enjoyed this Sven~ |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely! Everyone needs a safe place in their life...  |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh that was beautiful! Just beautiful! Sauni |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Sven; Beautiful and so poetically lovely. Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I can always count on a wonderfully deep sigh when I come in to read your tender thoughts Sven ... absolutely lovely and visual. Beautifully penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you! {~,^} |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
always a pleasure to read your work, Sven ... this is no exception ... nice, very nice ... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sven....... I see you're a bird-watcher, too!! This was absolutely beautiful, and tender......... "...if only I were a bird...." ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Such gentilness and heartfelt words my friend, very nice. Is there nothing you can't write about?  Marina < !signature--> It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 07-18-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . BDC, glad that you enjoyed. . . deVine, thank you, I only wish that everyone did. . . Saunni, thank you so much!! Ellie, thanks, I am glad that you liked it. . . Kit, it's always a pleasure for me to share my thoughts with all of you. . .  Sunny, you're welcome. . . MA, the pleasure is all mine my friend. . . Sunny1, birds have always fascinated me. . . I could watch them for hours. . . Marina, thank you, but there are plenty of things that I can't write about. . . just haven't found them yet! -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
What a haven you have created with your words never say never |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sven, This lost bird shall come home for you posses much loving wormth and such a caring heart, thank you for the beautiful read. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Aah Sven, if only we all had someone in our lives willing to care for us this way... It is hard to always be the giver isn't it???? Beautiful sentiments my poetic friend I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you again. . . Paula, we'll leave the light on for you. . . Cerenity, thank you for the lovely comment. . . and you're welcome my friend. . . Isis, yes it is hard to always be the giver. . . but the rewards my friend. . . thank you for reading. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey Sveetie...this is so you, my gentle hearted friend...beautiful. But how could it not be...leave a trail of S'Mores crumbs, lost bird will find her way...hugs... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This shows the warmth and care of a boundless love and you put it forth with such a tender voice. I am sure she will come back knowing what she has before her. Wonderful read. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Sven, this is so pretty and sweet. What's this? Oh gosh I think I'm growing feathers... Take care, loved it. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
serenity, I'll leave a whole bag of crumbs!! Thank you my friend. . . Mark, thank you so much! I am glad that you enjoyed this. . . Claire, thank you. . . feathers?? They look lovely on you. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
Here you go again with words of encouragement My husband had a vision of me being a lost bird and he would be there for me So i know what you are talking about o'right And i am still lost but again i say the spirit here in Poetry sanctuary is uplifting Sven you are one of those spirit lifter monique |
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