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Ron
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669Michigan, US 
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I know you. You are the child, now grown, hypnotized by the rhythmic cadence of Mother's voice. You are the toddler, always falling, exploring dark and hidden places, forever reaching. You are the school child, still learning, the word "Why?" imprinted on your psyche. You are the teen, hormones flaring, engulfed equally by love and lover's grief. You are the adult, living life, discovering joy and pain anew every day. You are the man, you are the woman, you are the writer, awash with memories, drowning in feelings, teeming with desires, a vortex of wise answers and wiser still questions. I know you. You are my brother, my sister, my other self. I know you. I do. You are a poet. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When was the last time you posted, O friend of mine? When did we last gaze upon your uttered phrase? And now we have one to see and I give thanks, to you, from me. Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Lovely poem......Good writing  Julie :) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I know you. You are the child, now grown, hypnotized by the rhythmic cadence of Mother's voice. You are the toddler, always falling, exploring dark and hidden places, forever reaching. You are the school child, still learning, the word "Why?" imprinted on your psyche. ---------------- You are the man, you are the woman, you are the writer, awash with memories, drowning in feelings, teeming with desires, a vortex of wise answers and wiser still questions. I know you. You are my brother, my sister, my other self. I know you. I do. You are a poet. ------------------- as are you our gracious and kind host. a very nice treat for us to have a taste of you for a change. words of wisdom, written with grace. take care, jm |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Ron, a wonderful poem. I know you. I do. You are a poet Thank you providing us with a wonderful haven where we may safely reveal ourselves and get to know other beautiful people that without this ite we would never meet.  A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You are that poet and a the writer of stories, the captain of our passionate ship. We would gladly walk the plank for you. Your talent sets the standard to which we all aspire. Lead on! We're behind you, beside you and will always be with you. This is a marvelous poem, Ron. A rare glimpse at your talent. Thank you. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Ron, this is wonderful!!!! Thank you for sharing with us. Both with your poetry and by giving us this wonderful home to be one with our Passions Family. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Ron, I just want to say THANK YOU for Passions! I had stopped writing for a long time before I found this place, and now I find something that inspires almost everyday! Everyone here is just so friendly and civil! This place really is my second home, literally! By the way ..... This poem ROCKS!!! All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Ron, as usual, I adore your work...you need to write more my dear friend, and let us enjoy your talent.... ~Heather |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Yep...writing more is a good thing... this is great...just great K~Sleeping Beauty never knew how lucky she really was~ (Me) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ron~ 'I know you ... you are a poet' ... and therefore inclined with a tendency toward forgetfulness. Just where is the SUBMIT function for this gem ??????? Wonderful thoughts, Ron. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Ron... this is a really fine piece of poetry!... hey, i know you!... you're a poet! No doubt in my mind!!! Wonderful verse... succinct & very special! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes Ron, we have all grown to know each other thru our writing...nice to meet you. Excellent writing. James |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Ever since I have joined Passions, I don't recall you posting a poem. Perhaps this new software is bringing the best out in us all. Encore! Encore! Marina It is blessing to have wings for your words, and passion to flow from pen. Marina Crossley |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ron, Oh I loved this, especially... I know you, I do You are a poet. WOW!! Me thinks we need to read more of your works Ron My grief lies onward and my joy behind (Shakespeare) |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
And you, my friend are the poet of all poets! You should include this piece in the voices on the web book, all poets should read this gem! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hi...great poem...and it is my honor to meet you....and I'd like to add my thanks, along with so many others...I hadn't written for years until I found the forum--it's so great to have a place to share now. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Ron, Wow...great poem!!! Love it!!! I think it says a lot about us all here at Passions. Have to say THANK YOU for providing such a wonderful place for all of us to write and share our poetry. Feels like home to me. You are the best!!!  Lone Wolf Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Ron! I wish you had the time to post more often. This is a real treat! Denise |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
I know you- very lovely and so true, Enjoyed the easy flow of words I enjoy netpoet.com very much also thx for all the hard work. Look forward to reading more of your poetry. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
A pleasure, indeed, to read this, Ron. Your wisdom and insight make this poem, this place, a living treasure, and I thank you sincerely for that. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
This is a wonderful poem! I would just like to thank you for this wonderful haven where poets can gather and share their gift. Coming from a poet who shares her work with no one, this is a comforting and wonderful place where I can post my poetry without fear of ridicule or rejection. Thank you for that! --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron--I saw your name and it seemed to come with a smile that you made, dear sir, for I was afraid it wasn't you Ron, but another Ron. I'm so glad to be able to read something that you have written... Anyway...thanks for joining us here and for this wonderful place!...oh, and great poem! [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 06-25-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
And we know you oh great Wizard. . . you are indeed a wise and superb being. . . Thanks for this poem. . .it was really good and shows the depth of your talent. . . Excellent. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Ron writes??? Sorry, it's just that I've never read any of your work before. I'm glad you posted this. It's beautiful! Thank you for sharing it with us. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Your words are so true Ron....poets do know one another so well...we have connections, views, and emotions that I truly believe that a non-writer just doesn't understand. Powerful work, I'm glad to see you posting! *Krista Knutson* "Cherish your vision; Cherish your ideals; Cherish the music that stirs in your heart, the beauty that forms in your mind, the loveliness that drapes your purest thoughts. If you remain true to them, your world will at last be built." ~James Allen~ "We've made houses for hatred...it's time we made a place where people's souls may be seen and made safe"...~Jewel~ |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Ron, you've captured the poetic spirit with incredible skill (Of course I knew it was there Oh great Passionate Guru!) I loved the last two lines especially. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and letting us into your wonderful home! Abrahm Simons "Keep on dreamin' boy 'cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die" - Blind Melon |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
...and know me well you do! Good to see you posting a poem, fellow poet! To say your work has been missed would be a DIRE understatement. Thanks for sharing this with us, Ron. Michael |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Ron, This poem is fabulous, and you are such a kind hearted man, to share so much with us here at Passions. This place is not a second home to me, it is home and I love it here, so thank you very much for having it. Now for a big WHY is this poem not set up to be a book submission, do we all need to vote for you publically? It's a landslide anyway, this poem should be the opening poem of Voices. |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Wonderful poem, Ron! Just want to say, "I love it here at Passions!!" ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Ron, The ties that bind, the common denominator that brings us all together,they are found right here in these forums that you have given us. For all of the differences that we may have we have, age, race, social standing, we are all one as poets. This poem should be the flagship for the book. It encompasses all that these forums represent. I am happy to have been able to finally read one of your works. Wonderful poem... and thank you. Trew. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You know, I know, you're the poetmeister... I know you are... Did I happen to mention that you're awesome too?... Trust me - You are!!..  |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Our Passionate Guru, all this is due solely from your love of poetry and the written word, not to mention your wonderful personality and compassion for others. Splendid poem, my friend. Alicat |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
This only goes to show a true poet's writings, and a sensitive and caring soul to boot!! Beautiful Ron!! I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Ron, these responses listed above, as well as mine, are a fitting tribute to what you are and what you have done. If it is true that a man's success is based on how many lives he touches and how much of a difference he can make to brighten others' lives then I would say that you are successful beyond any standard known. By your hard work and determination and passion, hundreds of people here have had a place to share their poetry, happiness, sadness, make new friendships and have their loads lightened a little by the comraderie of others. Quite a feat from one man and yet it is so. This threat is your testament and proof of your accomplishment.,,,and what you've done will not be forgotten. Oh, and the poem wasn't bad, either In order to keep a true perspective of one's importance, everyone should have a dog that will worship him and a cat that will ignore him. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Ron ever since i joined Passions, i have been longing to read a poem from you...real glad that this fervent wish is fulfilled today!! such words of truth and wisdom...like the rest, i expect this to be posted in the VoW so that i may vote for this gem!! regards |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Ron, Yes we are all kindred spirits in a way, everyone who puts thoughts on paper, but here on passions we a closer knit family, a family whose principles reflected in the poetry reflect the patriarch of the family. Thank you for maintaining this web site with integrity and yet with warmth and openness. Liked the poem Liz |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
nicely done ... good choice in subjects I know you too you are the seam of our fellowship [This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 06-26-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a magnificent poem this would be for the start of the book Ron! I've often wondered what makes poetic souls "different" from the rest, and you've captured it so concisely in this splendid poem. Each day in these forums, I see others, who with a stroke of their pen, are able to put to paper, any number of these wonderful traits you've described so eloquently. Indeed, it is as if you see a reflective glimpse into anothers soul ... a poets soul. Beautiful, thought-provoking poem! Thank you again Ron, and glad to see you got a chance to get away from the programming for a wee bit Best wishes /Kit |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Ron you really should post more! It is so rare to see your work, but a treasure when we do! This one really speaks to me, I love it! This one can speak to people of all ages...gotta read this one to the 'chillens' |
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Ron
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669Michigan, US |
Gosh. You guys are really fantastic. To be honest, your comments have brought a shadow of a tear to my eye and brightened what has been a darn hectic, often awkward, week. I begin a 3-day tech class today, and I should be preparing my class plan this morning, but I had to take a moment to thank everyone for the tremendous outpouring of support. Those of you who follow some of the discussions in Philosophy know that I don't believe in altruism. Everyone does everything they do for purely selfish reasons, and I'm no different. Passions exists because I honestly enjoy sharing my world and time with like-minded people who believe in the power of the written word, who trust as I do that this world can be changed by better understanding the hearts of others. The Truth found in poetry, or any honestly written work, is the highway leading towards that understanding, and Passions is just one of many onramps to that highway. Obviously, it's become a pretty important onramp in my life, and I take seriously my job of filling in the potholes and laying down a new patch of asphalt where it's needed. It's extremely gratifying to know others have found the onramp as valuable as do I. Rest assured that when the sun is beating mercilessly on bare shoulders, when the smell of tar clogs my nostrils and the weight of my shovel seems too much to bear, your words - in this thread and in your poetry - will make a real difference to me. And while I don't do it as often as I once did, or as often as I'd like, I will always try to leave the onramp occasionally and venture out into the middle of the road with the rest of you wonderful poets. There, after all, is where the real work of changing the world one word at a time is being done. In closing, I'll leave you with a sordid confession. As I indicated in a recent Forum News post, I'd like to write a new poem as my entry in Voices, and that's where this poem had its origin. The working title was "Passion's Promise," and was meant to be an exploration into my vision of what this site means. But as so often happens in poetry, the focus changed as the words found their way to paper. Instead of talking about the website, instead of talking about the poetry and the power we have in our hands for real change, I found myself writing about the poets, about the people who have truly built Passions. About you. And I think maybe that's the way it should be. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Obscured by clouds, the sun shone, showered Rays vivid and bright, at the other world, When the dark feathers from sky cleared, An infinite glow when lovely sparklers rained, bold. A solar eclipse brought out a rare diamond ring, Busy birds, tentative, nervous a while ago, tweeted, Now, in perfect harmony and synchronised melody, they sing, And I behold the Master, in a divine throne, seated. Fine words, expertly carved pieces of a rare artefact, An ode glorifying the lesser beings took glorious shape, The Emperor of Passions with exotic charm does attract, With a write, so well-written that I stare and gape. ....... Ron, Thanks for everything.... regards, sudhir. Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
this is wonderful ron, it even answers a question I have thought of before, with so many of us here posting our hearts and lives, how do you see us...I love your answer |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Hmmmm.... as I read this poem I thought to myself "Self... (funny how I always call myself that, isn't it?) "Self, this should be the introductory poem for The Book (shouldn't we have a shortcut keystroke for that? :b or something?). Anyway, it should be submitted for votes. BTW, I'm glad I am not the only one around here who understands selfishness and all it entails.... Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP "Everything is your own damn fault, if you are any good." E. Hemmingway |
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Jester59701 Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 154 |
Hi Ron! This poem is fantastic! I love it! Thank you so much for passions! You may know me, but I didn't know me, until I found passions. It really has changed my life! Your poem sais it all so beautifully.I'm not sure, but I think I believe in altruism though, (for purely selfish reasons). You've certainly been generous with your heart. Thank you again. Jester |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
A beauty ! Spoken from the heart and I do feel this should be a submission for the book. You are allowed to post two poems Ron |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ron~ This is great! Glad to have an opportunity to tell you how much I love it here. This is my favorite place on the WEB. I look forward to coming here and enjoying everyone's beautiful poetry. Thank you so much for Passions. Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
When we can see ourselves in anothers words the author has written well. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Well I think we know you too..... Captain Ron, steering the good ship passions and its poetic crew through uncharted waters.... Great job Captain..... and a darn good poem. Parker |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Well worth the wait Ron and it made me think about the owner of these thoughts as well..thanks for the smiles here.. HUSG |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Ron incredible writings...this was the most wonderful read This is the first poem of yours I have had the pleasure of reading and I was blown away by it....thanks Ron for sharing yourself with us Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Ron, Wonderful words coming from the head of the house, may I thank you for such a awesome place to come you provide so well for your passions family. Love, Cerenity |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Finally I get to read a poem from Ron, Which was worth the wait! We know you...is this going to be in the book? |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Excellent thoughts so kindly expressed. Thanks for everthing. |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ron, Beautiful thoughts, woven into a wonderful poem. Until I saw this one here, the only others of yours I've read have been on the main site, when I happened in here so long ago. Those beautiful poems and cards are what brought me back here....Thanks for all you do. Bonnie |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Yeah, I like this a lot! Corinne |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Hi Ron Well this is a fantastic poem! I just had to come in and say so. In your wonderful site its never too late to reply. *Thanks for allowing insect to be a part of all this magic that appears on the stage of forums. Creativity has always been a part of me and your site has made it possible for myself and all the other poets to express some of it.  Here's a poem for you _______________________________ Poetry Rainbow You shine through me I am arched into your gold You allow me to be free I will show my colours till I'm old Sometimes I may fade Then your sun breaks through the rain Suddenly a colourful cascade We become a Poetry Rainbow again _______________________________ |
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merlynh Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 411deer park, wa |
I can you know me, when I don't even know myself? We all look for so much more, when all the answers are deep inside, away from I, just like them, who are all of us.Peace be with you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful and full of love. so very good. I know you too, the owner of the many poets. beautiful poem again. |
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