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Raveberry New Member
since 2000-06-24
Posts 1 |
We lie to save our faces from the eternal hell of shame to hold heads high and show off calm. But inside the war never stops the knives never cease to cut our flesh and nobody sees the scars scorns leave. Pride has its values but stupidity is too much to bear and I think I've sinned -may 20 |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Very true, Raveberry, and stated nicely too. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Raveberry~ Welcome to our family of Passionate Poets. Hope we'll see more from your pen in the future. *Hug* that little sister of yours for me !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Rave, really liked the poem. intense emotions. take care. welcome to passions. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
yup, yup, yup we are our own worst critics! Good thoughts... ~H |
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