Open Poetry #8 |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
I wrote this last night. I knew that I was going to see some one from my past that was very important to me, someone I loved very much..and still do to my dismay. My eyes caress over you body, As my hands long to do. My arms ache to hold you. My lips yearn to taste you. But they don’t… they cant. My heart calls out to you, Filled with the love And with the loneliness That fills me throughout the days, Throughout the weeks, Throughout the years. When would I learn? Would my love ever fade away? I look away as your gaze moves to me. I feel the blush rise in my cheeks. Knowing you know how I feel, Knowing you know I love you. You just want to be friends You tell me as my heart dies How can I be your friend? When all I want to do is love you For a thousand lifetimes. For all of eternity. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Perfection! The emotions expressed here lingered with sadness but very beautiful nonetheless. I look forward to reading more from you. Loved this read very much thank you. Take care. Amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
I can identify with this very much , and you express it so well, Do we ever really stop loving someone?. Wonderfully written, Olias |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
do we ever indeed.... I think when you love someone they become a part of you so completely that you lose sight of where they and and where you begin.. good poem!! It needs a title for the book tho ~Heather |
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