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jennie may*
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 122


0 posted 2000-06-24 01:02 AM


a life
one million miles away
from these hands

I busy myself with
pointless chores
and wasted moments
that add up to
nothing

I read until I can't
see anymore

I swallow the
lump
in my throat

all to keep running away
from the memory of your
voice

to try and drown the
taste of your breath
to conquer every
I love you
you ever gave me

before it conquers me




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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-06-24 01:10 AM


Hi..welcome to passions! This is a great first post! Please check your email for a special message.  
tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
2 posted 2000-06-24 05:42 AM


Jenni~
Welcome to passions   This is a fine piece you've written here. I'll keep watching for more from you
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2000-06-24 05:50 AM


Hi Jenny
Fine piece of work here. Looking forward to more from you!

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