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A Poet's Tragedy |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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senyru Pen itches to write~ Paper tons scream to be heard~ Hand sulks, unmoving |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Writer's block? I hate when that happens. I am new at this and even newer here, however I have found great inspiration and calmness in this forum. Here's hoping that the heart reaches the pen. I liked it by the way. |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
this is where good old fashioned nonsense writing comes in really handly, though, i do like your simple reply of stumbling to write, i find my self there in the late of the day, and sometimes have to wait to the late of the night. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Kaile, This is great, you have put very well what most of us go through and you did it so perfectly, thank you for sharing. Cerenity |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
oh yes i hate when that happens put i find help in going somewhere different as always great work at play here. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kaile, You have captured so well the angst I've felt when trying to force inspiriation. I accept your challenge to write one of these expressing my writers block feelings, that is if I don't FREEZE UP! LOL Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
"Hand sulks,unmoving", This line says it all for me Kaile, great line from a poem that sums up frustration. Thanks for sharing Olias |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
A tragedy indeed Kaile! I hope your hand behaves itself soon! Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
LOL Grab yer thesaurus and beat yer hand with it til it gives in!!!!!  great senryu! I lahked it muchly girl! ~Heather |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Grrrrr!!! That is the absolute pits when it happens! You put it so well and in so few words -appropriate I guess-excellent!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  < !signature-->"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." [This message has been edited by ESP (edited 06-24-2000).] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thanx all for ur generous comments |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Kaile~ Damn that writer's block indeed! I know how that feels. A great senryu kaile, one we can all relate to so well. And it truly would be a tragedy if you have writer's block, never again to share another beautiful poem of yours with us. Keep writing! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
yes,Melissa,i will keep writing! thanx for your compliment |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Haha... poet's tragedy, writer's block!! But great job done here, so it seems like you don't have such a problem huh?  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you're good at these |
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