Open Poetry #8 |
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A Giant's Asylum |
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di Morte New Member
since 2000-05-13
Posts 8 |
A Giant's Asylum Doting, scuffing along, yet driven, conscious of no giants walking yesteryear, well coiffed, full maned, down great halls where fates had given right-of-way to them, each hawking wisdom they alone sustained; ignorant that he'd once been foremost, don to causes, funds begotten, daring dream discoveries thriven; past outrageous fate's safe doorpost, shuffling, pjs pee-stained, forgotten castoffs wait and reek unshriven. --Fr Veni di Morte |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
i don't know what to say, imagery, well accomplished. brings up profound feelings of what we think is crazy and what we stage as crazy and what they make crazy. kinldy, reddheart angrybraids |
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di Morte New Member
since 2000-05-13
Posts 8 |
ty for taking time to comment. vdm |
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snow in summer Member
since 1999-08-28
Posts 67 |
very humbling...... |
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