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All Night Long
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All Night Long |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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All Night Long Amy M. Kennedy Close the door baby The rest of the world out of sight Consumed by the fire Flames of passion ignite You stare into my eyes As I softly caress your face Running my fingers through your hair Our kisses pick up pace All night long I could stay like this Forever wrapped in your loving arms Seduced by your sweet kiss Flames of heat Start burning stronger And we start to lose control Unable to hold back any longer It’s summer time now And the heat is intense I’ve been in love before But it never felt like this Love me right now Love me for always And I promise you By your side I will forever stay You have the key That goes to my heart of hearts Our eyes lock again And once more the passion starts Unable to resist Our attraction is so true In soft candle light We sweetly make love, me and you. "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 06-23-2000).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Amy, this is just beautiful. I especially liked the first verse. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Amy~ You go girl, this is hot! Such passion in your words, as always very well written!  Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WOW WHEW...  me thinks me eyebrows got singed reading this passionate and sensual jewel!! WONDERFUL writing amy-girl... love seeing you explore this side of your writing... better be careful your poets pen is SMOKING   later-lover-gator jm |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Amy, Passion at it's best!!! So full of feeling and warmth. Hope it is all working out for you my friend. Great writing. LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wow Amy ... passionate, powerful, and so moving ... beautiful writing! (sounds like a keeper he does) Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amy~ Beautifully done. 'I’ve been in love before But it never felt like this' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
thank you all for you kind comments. as always, they are most appreciative! love ya, Amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Lovely poem!!!!! |
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sleepless Junior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 13 |
wow, I loved it!!!!!!!!! great expressions in it. |
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