Open Poetry #8 |
Blow free |
Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
Blow free as natural air For if you're created you blow In a told direction. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
So much said in so few words! Good job! Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Jeremiah this is the best poem i have read from you so far...this is so short and simple yet seemingly so deep, open-ended,containing layers for the reader to peel and figure out for himself.... okay, my interpretation here:concept of Follow Your Heart! will like to know your intention of writing this poem here [This message has been edited by kaile (edited 06-25-2000).] |
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