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continued(smiling with broken shame)the wooden birth
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii 
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Silence the ungodly warning -whispered our earthly souls, smiling with broken shame and cumbersome desire. I feel wooden with the scent of wind burning wick that candle swam. Waiting as drunkeness cheecks your breath. Feathers lonely purr swift, but mirthful. The wooden birth. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
"Smiling with broken shame", "the wooden birth"--such powerful phrases. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
redheart--you've got a "fan" in me---won't claim I always understand your intentions--but I love the way you lace together snippets of surreal imagery, it's like a dream... |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
elizabeth-thank you for your response, i love getting feed back, kindly, redheart angrybraids serenity- thank you so much, you always have such a pleasant and gratifying response to me, i hope i motivate you in some poetic way as you have motivated and replenished my exceptance into the poetry land, thank you kindly, redheart angrybraids |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I miss you very much Amelia... stunning as always  |
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