Open Poetry #8 |
You are so beautiful |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
When I met you, I knew, I would love you, Cause you're so beautiful, So beautiful to fall in love with you, Anyone will fall in love, When they look into your eyes, Your eyes are so beautiful, Your touch makes me like I'm in heaven, Your smile is like a warming sun, I want to run to you, So I would be with you, You're so beautiful, You're everything That anyone would make you forever, Tal=ke my heart, Take my hand, I would never ask you for anything, I would make you forever, My love, I give my heart to you, Because you're so beautiful, So beautiful that makes my heart go crazy, I never would ask for anything, |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This poem reminds of the tender love song "You Are So Beautiful To Me" By Joe Cocker. Your poem is beautifully expressed. Take care, Melissa Honeybee [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 06-11-2000).] |
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shilpi Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 73 |
Hi Vandana, "The poem" is so beautiful !!! regards, shilpi |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Vandana THIS is so BEAUTIFUL! whomever inspired you to write this lovely work of art has indeed captured your heart. i am happy to see that you are happy and expressing it so lovely. take care. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely done Vandana... wonderfully written. |
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