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Soulmate Of My Heart
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Soulmate Of My Heart |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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~SOULMATE OF MY HEART~ Many lifetimes ago, upon the sands of time, our souls awoke to God's laughter, and sailed upon the heavenly breeze of love, two souls enchanted by the beauty of the other, playing and skipping in heaven's light, hand in hand, our spirits dreamed and danced in angelic reverie, and as God smiled and breathed his sigh of delight, we became one, destined to be together, a love story from the breath of God, knowing that one day we shall meet again on earth, and in that moment we will know that our love was meant to be, for, my eyes need not see you now to know that you exist, my heart already knows *By Melissa Honeybee* |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Melissa, Sigh...so wonderful. These lines are fabulous: we shall meet again on earth, and in that moment we will know that our love was meant to be, for, my eyes need not see you now to know that you exist, my heart already knows We all will know when we find the right one for us.  Great writing!!LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Coach New Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 1Nebraska |
Wow, To have the strength of more than one soul, and not let the head confuse what the heart is in search of. A rare gift.. We are all a part of something else, it seems you know what that is.. Thank you for reminding me..Keep it up, I'll be watching. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is very beautiful writing, Melissa |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
this was very beautiful Melissa... I always had that feeling that in a long ago life, my soul mate and I were together, just waiting to meet again.... So is it you.  Parker... or is it Mr. Right... |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Nice poem and it flowed very well....cestiny will happen.....wheather you want it to or not! great writing! Julie :) |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Sorry that is Destiny......"oops" |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Ooooh........incredibly lovely words, Melissa. "we will know that our love was meant to be, for, my eyes need not see you now to know that you exist, my heart already knows" It is a strong heart that never gives up on that perfect love....and you have a strong heart indeed Melissa. Again, beautiful work! *Krista Knutson* "Cherish your vision; Cherish your ideals; Cherish the music that stirs in your heart, the beauty that forms in your mind, the loveliness that drapes your purest thoughts. If you remain true to them, your world will at last be built." ~James Allen~ "We've made houses for hatred...it's time we made a place where people's souls may be seen and made safe"...~Jewel~ |
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Wonder Woman New Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 5State Of Emergency |
[b]Melissa~ Yes ... it's true ... 'my eyes need not see you now to know that you exist, my heart already knows' [b]< !signature--> [This message has been edited by Wonder Woman (edited 06-23-2000).] |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
Melissa, This sounds like it could fit perfectly in the bible book "Song of Solomon". The bible's only book completely devoted to Lovers. This is a totally awesome poem. The rhythm is outstanding in this piece and I was completely drawn in. I especially love the line, "a love story from the breath of God". What a powerful line. J~ |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Once again you cup runs over with beauty and emotion, and it fills me till I think I will drown. Wonderful poetry Melissa, as usual I stand in awe. Thankyou. Olias |
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RHONDA BROYLES New Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 9 |
Well all I can truly say is that you a have a talent and just keepin reachin for your talent and you will go far |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautifully written and the rhyme is perfection. Look forward to reading more of your creations. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Melissa, Well this is my favorite of yours thus far! True perfection penned in this one! Beautiful rhyme, and even more beautiful message and choice of words. I stand in complete awe of you my friend. Take care. Amy *Smile*"Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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notlikely2 Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 308UK |
Very, very nice... such feeling...I am jealous of your ability! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Melissa. this is EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!! and SO beautiful... yes my fav of yours now too your soulmate has inspired a wonderful poem in you... the rhyme is perfect... SUPERB!!!!!!! take care, jm |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I was shocked to see so many replies to this, a big THANK YOU to everyone! Take care, Melissa Honeybee I have written 2 more "soulmate" poems, I guess I have love on the mind right now, and I will post them soon |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
we will know that our love was meant to be, for, my eyes need not see you now to know that you exist, my heart already knows so souls are destined to together, and I never believed in soulmates until I met mine. a wonderful poem. really enjoyed it. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Absolutely beautiful writing Melissa ... I too think this is my favorite of yours so far. Beautifully expressed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is good to know that you love without seeing the person because sometimes seeing them is what blinds us cause we all look for the wrong things at times. great work and great poem love it. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Gosh this was so good BTTT!!!! "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you so much everyone! Hey Amy what does BTTT mean? Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Melissa, this is so beautiful. It has a wistful, peaceful tone in the memories you have described. Very nicely done. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
This is beauty in words, Melissa. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Beautifully written, Melissa...I really enjoyed it!! ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you so much everyone for your kind replies. I have always believed that soulmates exist for everyone Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Two thumbs up from me! A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Melissa. . . How did I miss this one??? It's just beautiful. . . I too believe in soulmates. . . yours is out there. . . and you will find him. . .I know it. . . Just wonderful. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"two souls enchanted by the beauty of the other." Melissa this is the way I feel about soulmates. I want to believe that a woman will admire me just as much as I admire her....James |
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