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CrazyChick
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since 2000-01-05
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0 posted 2000-07-06 01:36 AM


               THEY'RE ALL JUST LIES

Your lies comfort me
even though they're just lies
They make me feel loved and wanted
this fake love has brought me so far
even if it is all so fake and untrue
I was vulnerable and scared
you swept me away and brought me to hell
I wanted to be loved so much
I made myself believe all your lies

In my eyes you could do no wrong
but my eyes were blind
in my heart you were perfect
but my heart was wrong
  almost dead wrong

I thought you were the one, the only one
but I wasn't looking past my broken heart
I was looking for comfort in the worst way
and I made myself see it in you
just because you were there

I know can see all your imperfections
but now its to late
you already have control over me

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Irie
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since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
1 posted 2000-07-06 02:45 AM


This is a painful reminder for me. I remember this feeling all to well.
Been throught this same ordeal and I look back and wonder how I survived it!
Very well expressed Crazy chick. If this is a "real life' experience, I hope you are able to break away, very soon!


~Sheri

CrazyChick
Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132

2 posted 2000-07-06 02:56 AM


Thank you Sheri
I wrote this in the hospital last month
I'm very happy to be alive   and safe at home

thank you for your reply      

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