Open Poetry #8 |
Silent Ovation |
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
A Silent Ovation Do you actually know why they were created? The emotions of the universe are what I speak of. Their purpose and cause are daily debated; But why...? They are all just signs of love. The rain merely tears of life so sorrow; The snow no more than a fluffy blanket of protection. The stars are only the brilliant promise of tomorrow. They all promise us life and relay us early detection. The wind, kindly,... yet forcibly, offers us power; The sun showers us with warmth and vigor. The moon can only offer a nite-lite from it's tower. All are only offerings of ways found no bigger. The lightning gives us a brilliant,yet, silent ovation; While the thunder lends us the spectacular applause. These are just nature's way of giving us motivation. They are only trying to show they believe in our cause. Mark Bohannan |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
But why...? They are all just signs of love. The rain merely tears of life so sorrow; The snow no more than a fluffy blanket of protection. The stars are only the brilliant promise of tomorrow. They all promise us life and relay us early detection. The wind, kindly,... yet forcibly, offers us power; The sun showers us with warmth and vigor. The moon can only offer a nite-lite from it's tower. All are only offerings of ways found no bigger. ------------------- this is such a COOL poem and beautiful too!! I love the imagery and use of the forces of nature to define the many emotions of love. very creative and well written. VERY!!! take care, jm |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is VERY good, I like it! Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Right on Mark! I like that comparison of the lightning a silent ovation and the thunder the applause. I really enjoyed this piece. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Janet Marie, nice to see that someone can see what is really there. Thank you for taking the time and for the right on interpretation. But then again it all interprets to what we see it as anyway. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Mark I enjoyed the message in this poem..James |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sunshine, ethome, and James; thanks for the comments and glad you enjoyed it. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very creative indeed! Well done, Mark! Denise |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is quite lovely, Mark. Corinne |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Denise and Corinne--- Thank you and I am really happy you enjoyed it. |
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FlyHigh Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 84Bekkestua, Norway |
Oooooo, agree with ethome about the lightning and thunder.. Brilliant. Geir Jakobsen -- "Luck affects everything. Let your hook always be cast; in the stream where you least expect it there will be a fish." Ovid (BC 43-18 AD) |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Wonderful Mark, I love the line "The stars are only the brilliant promise of tommorrow" I'm sorry I haven't had chance to read more of your work, but I'll remedy that a.s.a.p Very enjoyable Thankyou Olias |
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Alexander Duke Junior Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 12 |
I like the way you try and take inspiration from what is around you. I find that inspirational. Good poem thanks |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"These are just nature's way of giving us motivation." I really enjoyed this Mark! You've used some beautiful imagery and symbolization here ... really delightful read! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
To Geir, Olias, Alexander and Kit-- Thank you all for your kind words. It really means alot to get so much feedback from everyone. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 06-24-2000).] |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Hi, Mark! Great imagery! Well written! Nice to meet you! ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Lorraine-Thank you for the comments. Nice to meet you also. Loved yours titled"School Daze" |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Love the stars and the universal thoughts of this... very nice indeed Mark. Linda M. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ Can't conjure up more emotion found in nature than this - 'The lightning gives us a brilliant,yet, silent ovation; While the thunder lends us the spectacular applause.' Yes ! Yes ! Yes ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
needs to be in the book come on i love it big times "Amadeus Amadeus. Amadeus. Amadeus Amadeus. Amadeus. Am Am Amadeus. Come on and rock me Amadeus!"-Falco "don't even lissen to classical music!"-me |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Linda- thank you so much. Looks like you went digging a bit. Thanks again. Marge-Nature and me -- we are best buds.LOL Thank you so much and put that shampoo down before they put you in the commercial. wayoutwalt-I did a repost of this for the book and it is floating out there somewhere. Thank you so much for your reply |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh my, what can I say? That was amazing how you put all that in words! I loved every bit of it! Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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