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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2000-06-22 08:13 AM


All about me
disarray--
ex-poet's battlefield...
crumpled corpse
of dead sestinas...
aspirin
now my only grace.

Why does my ink not flow like his?
Why won't my words connect like hers?
Insane to still sit at this desk
and blame it all on Christopher...



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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-06-22 08:36 AM


LOL...blame it on Chris...
does this mean Mike was right ...AGAIN  
(JUST WRITE)...
me thinks Mike is always right*smile*


from you we need no sestinas
dont need no--not so simple Haiku
dont need no perfect sonnet ...
you know what we need from you
no need to change your style
your poetry is your grace
each perfect heartfelt expression
brings both a tear and smile to me face  
your poems are perfect--
they are like an angel's kiss...
so stop trying to write a new way  
just write your heart and then dress it up like this...(****)

never underestimate the power of a couple
well placed parenthesis me twin
*winkie winkie*

*kiss kiss* me sweet...

love ya
me


serenity blaze
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2 posted 2000-06-22 08:49 AM


Janet Marie---thank You for that lovely reply....but you know I will not give up...
I LIKE the challenge...grin...

love back atchya...I live to fight another day...

Parker
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since 2000-01-06
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3 posted 2000-06-22 10:16 AM


Lets not talk about Christopher.
Your much cuter, much prettier
and those eye's
I'm not sure who she is?
and who the hell is Christopher?
Who are you?
But those eyes!
they sing of sweet and sad poetry
his sestina will never compare to your eyes!

now where was I going?
Oh yes, but I shall return.

redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16
Posts 410
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4 posted 2000-07-07 12:34 PM


countless nights as a mother, we will always be the heavy barers.


Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
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Purgatorial Incarceration
5 posted 2000-07-07 01:23 PM


You know, I feel sorry for this poor Christopher guy. He seems like such a nice fella. Always caring, giving, helpful. He never argues with anyone, never has a bad thing to say. Is upstanding, puts himself out for so-called friends. Sigh... LOL

Seren' - Sorry hun, if you want, you can take my headache and try to work one of those *********** sestinas!!!

JM - You lady, are in trouble! Mike? When has Mike ever been right? The only time I can think of, is when he agreed with me!!!  

Haleyja - You better watch it thar'!!

Sven
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6 posted 2000-07-08 05:08 PM


serenity,

I say let's string him up and read him sestinas until his head bursts!!!  

And I personally know that he invented the form. . . so. . .

And Parker. . . you'll be next!!  lol  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



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