Open Poetry #8 |
Not a Blankety-Blank Sestina |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
All about me disarray-- ex-poet's battlefield... crumpled corpse of dead sestinas... aspirin now my only grace. Why does my ink not flow like his? Why won't my words connect like hers? Insane to still sit at this desk and blame it all on Christopher... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
LOL...blame it on Chris... does this mean Mike was right ...AGAIN (JUST WRITE)... me thinks Mike is always right*smile* from you we need no sestinas dont need no--not so simple Haiku dont need no perfect sonnet ... you know what we need from you no need to change your style your poetry is your grace each perfect heartfelt expression brings both a tear and smile to me face your poems are perfect-- they are like an angel's kiss... so stop trying to write a new way just write your heart and then dress it up like this...(****) never underestimate the power of a couple well placed parenthesis me twin *winkie winkie* *kiss kiss* me sweet... love ya me |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Janet Marie---thank You for that lovely reply....but you know I will not give up... I LIKE the challenge...grin... love back atchya...I live to fight another day... |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Lets not talk about Christopher. Your much cuter, much prettier and those eye's I'm not sure who she is? and who the hell is Christopher? Who are you? But those eyes! they sing of sweet and sad poetry his sestina will never compare to your eyes! now where was I going? Oh yes, but I shall return. |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
countless nights as a mother, we will always be the heavy barers. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
You know, I feel sorry for this poor Christopher guy. He seems like such a nice fella. Always caring, giving, helpful. He never argues with anyone, never has a bad thing to say. Is upstanding, puts himself out for so-called friends. Sigh... LOL Seren' - Sorry hun, if you want, you can take my headache and try to work one of those *********** sestinas!!! JM - You lady, are in trouble! Mike? When has Mike ever been right? The only time I can think of, is when he agreed with me!!! Haleyja - You better watch it thar'!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
serenity, I say let's string him up and read him sestinas until his head bursts!!! And I personally know that he invented the form. . . so. . . And Parker. . . you'll be next!! lol ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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