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Open Poetry #8
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eyesplus2
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since 2000-03-02
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0 posted 2000-06-22 05:02 AM

I gave you a smile

You gave me a hello

I gave you a hello

You gave me your hand

I gave you my hand

You gave me your heart

I gave you my heart

You gave me your love

I said...I do
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whiskey
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1 posted 2000-06-22 05:04 AM

This is very romantic, sweet and Beautiful  
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2000-06-22 06:53 AM

Nice writing...if only it would work this way for me.    James
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