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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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I only known you for few days or so, yet it feels like I known you for years, just to hear you say hi makes me feel good, I cannot wait to call you when I wake up, I try keeping myself busy, by reading, cleaning, but my ears keep hearing your voice, when I hear you smile, I feel great inside, After talking with you on the telephone, I wish I can call you back and start it all over again, No, No, but I must control myself, I am just a guy who happens to meet you and who you just happen to give you number to, I use to think about myself talking to a girl was like I trying to eat meat, you being up front and saying the truth, it's just so different, you are somehow different for the rest of the world, you challenge me in ways I always hoped for, It is a feeling I am unable to describe, I hope our friendship shines like the sun, but does not wither away like a flower, Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i value your mind for you think as few do and i think the same. after reading one of your other poems i had to become a fan. you have such great work and i love it all. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Well you are No.1 fan. I thank you a million times and others for your support. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very lovely thoughts you have written...James |
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