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Three Recipies |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
A recipe for Death A garden of coldness A era of hate A season of lost love A eon of forgotteness A whisper of unforgiveningness A recipe for Life A lifetime of survival A eon of living with A harvest of understanding A recipe for love A eon of likeness A lifetime of caring A Empire of trust A ocean of joy P.S i know this is not my best work just trying something New. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Jeremiah, this is great, loved it filled with so much meaning  Please check your email. My grief lies onward and my joy behind (Shakespeare) |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Very well written I liked it alot |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
come come now, jj. you know every piece is not gonna be your best. but they are precious simply cuz you felt it, you wrote it. you used these words and made them yours. i LOVE the concept!!!! i am always looking for new concepts and ways to write!! i personally kinda dig this one!! kudos to you for trying something new!!!!!! CHECK YOUR EMAIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kynder A woman to a man is But a mere chapter, But a man to a woman Is an entire book.-- Kynder Howell |
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