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| Open Poetry #8 |
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Women of Passions (Poetic Rap) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Well, hearken all ye people, and get your hands to clappin' Give ear to my call, and listen to my rappin' For I'm about to tell ya 'bout some ladies of fashion Nothin' like 'em on Earth, those Women of Passions I was just a simple man who was good with words Till someone told me 'bout this place I'd never heard So I hooked up my modem and fired up my browser And when I got to that place, my heart went "WOWSER!" There they were on my screen from wall to wall How could I not yield to their gentle siren's call? They stole my heart with their work, and wooed me with their words And sang for me the sweetest songs I've ever heard BREAK IT DOWN!!!!!! (ROLL CALL!!!) (*background chorus--The Knights) PASSIONS!!! PASSIONS!!! WOMEN OF PASSIONS!! PASSIONS!!! PASSIONS!!! WOMEN OF PASSIONS!! (*background continues over the following*) There's PoetdeVine and PoetfemmeFatale And Janet Marie, she's my kinda gal! Marina, Devina, and Marge Tindal too But there'll never be another like Magnolia Blue Aimster and Kit and my good friend Irie Are here along with Tracie, to keep things cheery Dark Angel and Isis, and let's not forget Severn They always make me feel like I'm in seventh heaven. Lone Wolf and Alwye, who else did we miss? There are just too many to keep them in a list! Hey Munda, X-Angel and you too Miss Nan We just love you ladies, we're your biggest fans! CocoBaci, Skyfyre, and Lorraine Nisbet You all are about as good as it's going to get! Butterflies Don't Cry and A Romantic Heart Just like the others on this list, you're all sweet and smart!! (*background chorus fades*) So the next time you need to put a smile on your face Come on down to Passions, it's a really rockin' kinda place! The women that are here will make you feel alright To get to know them all is truly a delight! The women here are kind, they're all sweet and smart And if you're not careful, they may steal your heart These women of Passions know just what to say They're poets, you know it, each and every day! So ladies, we thank you for filling our lives with song Were it not for you our lives would be far too long Keep singing with your voices loud and crystal clear We'll take your words to our hearts and hold them very dear PEACE OUT!!!! WORD!!! ROFL!!! ---------------------------------------------------------------- < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 06-10-2000).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
YES THEY STOLE MY HEART AS WELL. AW THESE WOMEN, THEYLURE YOU IN WITH PRAISE AND KIND WORDS BUT I KNOW THEY ARE UP TO SOMETHING...AS THEY SAY THOUGH NEVER MESS WITH A POETESS...SO RESPECT TO THE WOMEN OF PASSION...THIS HAS BEEN THE WONDEROUS AND TOO TALENTED MC SVEN THE COOL AND THE FUNKY POETRY CREW, ON THE SCREEN. SVEN THE MAN. ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Outside open mouthed crowds Pass each other as if they're drugged Down pale corridors of routine Where life falls unatoned " "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Sven~ That was a great poem! I enjoyed the rap style. I loved this one. "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Hey man ! What else can I say but WOWSER ! COOL ! YEAH ! GREAT ! LOVE IT !  |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
 Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Awwww I'm flattered to be mentioned in yer lil rap! Thanks! Great poem, what fun! *kudos!* ~Heather |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ What delight is your rap ... Ladies hearts you do ZAP ! You've talent galore ... one we've come to adore ! Rap on with glee ... we'll listen to thee, our hearts filled with melodic rhapsody ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sven, I see you've dabbled into the lyic writing also (teehee) well my friend this 'Rap' you've shared is indeed a treat! Bye4now  Coco |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
 Kathleen "How do I love thee? Let me count the ways. I love thee to the depth and breadth and height My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight For the ends of Being and ideal Grace." Elizabeth Barrett Browning |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You're just too darn sweet Sven ... wonderful rap! Loved it! Best wishes, /Kit |
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nando Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 87Vaxjo, Smaland, Sweden |
Right on brother... Ice-cold, no mistakes... -nando- Ask me how to live your life, and this to you I´ll say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, you´ll smile at yesterday... |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Music to my ears! Yes, tis' true we have "Rapped" all of you around are little fingers and have put you under our spell. But that is just our magic way of saying Thank you to all of you men. Marina |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
ROFL.........Oh my I never though I would see the word "Rap" and the name "Sven" together....wonder of wonders....lol this is wayyy to funny! |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
WOWSER SVEN!!! I don't think there is any type of writing that you can't do, Sir Sven. I am amazed!! Here's a pat on the back, a high-five and a big ole hug for CONGRATS on a poem well done. I really love this rap...thanks for the smiles! MagnoliaBlue Pay a visit to: http://cyberageadventures.com You will love it! "A poem is just an expression of my life and heart."*CJB* ~*My Skipper Jim, I love you! Your Lady June*~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Great work you rapper you!!!! Thanks for the mention too!! I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
er, lithium supply getting a little low, Sven? ROFL! Great job on this one! Somehow, looking at your pic and imagining you rappin' is not an easy task but....hey, still waters run deep, they say, and this shows you can rap with the best of them. Very clever sticking all the girls' names in there, appealing to their vanity. Sly devil, you are!!! |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Sven~ What great fun! I love it!! Can't get any cooler than you!! Thanks for the mention. ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I'm glad I popped in when I did dearest...else I would have missed this!!! Too Cute Sven...you know the rest!!!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
This was truly a very fun read. It's a good thing that fame I don't need. For I looked and looked but it wasn't to be. No mention at all for the poet from Tennessee. ___________________________ Other than that, I loved it Sven!! "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Sven, you are so funny! Loved the "break it down" part with The Knights doing the chorus. It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Well, I'm just blushing with pride to be # 2 on your list! And so funny to hear you say WOWSER...my 3 year old loves Inspector Gadget Movie, and that's the only darn place I've heard the term! hehehe Can't stand the movie btw! LOL Anyways, you better duck from all the ladies you DIDN'T mention, I see a few frowns in here! And I'm still laughing at Brian Madden's reply, saying he wonders just what we're up to, when we're nice to him! ROFL This ROCKS Sven! |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Simply AWESOME SVEN.....you have out done yourself my man It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Sven,...so cool. You are truly talented in expressing yourelf. So well done..so fun to read. Take care. *Peace. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
You are so cool And I like your rappin' style your little rappin' poem put a smile on my dial love to you Sven you've made us gals Swoon Hope to see more From you in Passions real soon Thanks for the mention you cool rappin' dude you Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
ROTFL! CUTE!! TOO CUTE! *hugs and kisses* Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sven your romantic and a rapper wow is there anything u can't do? lol. this was great. thanks for the mention too. take care hon. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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PanDol Senior Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 1245USA |
Clap Clap Clap.... This is great Sven! Keep it up!< !signature--> ~PanDol [This message has been edited by PanDol (edited 06-13-2000).] |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Oops! ROFL!!! Sven, I know you know what I'm laughing at! Ok, now this is fantastic! How do you keep coming up with this stuff Sven? You never cease to amaze me my friend! I'm flattered that you've mentioned me in your little ditty! Good friends indeed! Hugs from me to you!  What's next Mister? Hmmm? ~Sheri |
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