Open Poetry #8 |
A candle burns for you |
tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
~A candle burns for You~ A candle burns for you ~ throughout the day and night Burning oh so brightly ~ that you may find the light My wish is that this candle ~ will always burn for you Burning flame of spirits ~ to help guide you through Guide you to your next journey ~ that awaits you in the light Your eternal peace and happiness ~ is now within your sight So a candle burns for you ~ flame flickering in the breeze God keep the candle burning ~ thats all I ask....Please < !signature--> Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 06-21-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Very lovely....beautiful sentiments etched, I really enjoyed this one, Tracie regards, sudhir. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is perfect Trac, beautiful and perfect... such serene thoughts later-perfect-poet-gator jm |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tracie~ oh this is so loving~ keeping a candle lit for a loved one. -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sudhir~ Thanks for reading this and thanks for you lovely comments, I'm glad you enjoyed. Tracie~ Janny~ So glad you like this, thanks for reading and replying in your most touching way Tracie~ Sea~ Thanks..I think it helps doesn't it, I hope so.. It helps us in some ways Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
wonderful poem tracie, Beautifully written |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Whiskey~ Thanks for your lovely reply Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ I really like this offering from your pen. The presentation is soft and glowing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Tracie~ this was very beautiful and peaceful! Excellent emotion coming from that wonderful poetic pen of yours! Take care. Amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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FadingSun Member
since 2000-05-01
Posts 76Southern California |
Tracie, This is so beautiful....I haven't had much time to visit the forum lately, but this poem reminded me how deeply I missed it. I love your poetry deeply! S~ In the sight of Love, fear isn't even as great as a single hair: in the law of Love, everything is offered as a sacrifice |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge~ Thanks for your lovely comments. My pen was going wild the other night, I could hardly keep up Tracie~ Aim~ I'm so glad you liked it...Thanks Tracie~ S~ Yeah I was wondering where you had gotten to, I was missing you around the place Thanks for your wonderful comments. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Very nice indeed .. as always Coco |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Coco thanks for that and also the smile..here's one in return Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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