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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas 
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-Lust- can I trust you to keep this secret of ours? how do we know this won't get out of hand and goto far? how did we end up here-lurking in the shadows and always with some degree of fear feeling the fear of being found out to others-but not able to stop this with my lover please don't foresake my trust in you-if you betrayed me now, what would I do? it doesn't seem fair to ask your faithfullness when I can't give you mine either-nor my trust so all we have for now are stolen passionate moments-not trust-not faithfullness-just our overwhelming lust HLB I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
good work at work here you got my vote. i really do like the ending it just hits you to a state of truth. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
Holly..beautiful poem. I know the way you are feeling here. This is truly great work.. A Dream is a Wish the Heart Makes... |
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sleepless Junior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 13 |
Very Direct and honest, more people in the world should be this forward, very good! waiting for more....... |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
GREAT WORK HOLLY....as always... ouknowiluvit....keepemcomin... chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Alexander Duke Junior Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 12 |
I found this poem very funny because I read I could picture the whole story. It is honest and I particularly like the end. |
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