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Haunted Heart |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas 
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-Haunted Heart- i didn't see it coming, it completely took me by surprise.. i'm shocked you can't see through me by looking into my eyes... we were just friends, laughing, joking, & just being us...feeling no pressure...being in no rush stealing some passionate moments, but keeping it all in check...never letting any of it have a harmful affect then like a train it hit me...I've fallen for you...not wanting to admit it I just close off those thoughts and refuse I can't tell you this...it's painfully clear this is not what you ever wanted...now my heart will have the "what if" forever haunting it HLB I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i lov ethe end with the what if you show the question of never knowing and use it well bravo... I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
Breath taking Holly. Almost as if you were staring straight into my heart with this one... A Dream is a Wish the Heart Makes... |
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sleepless Junior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 13 |
Holly, Very good!!! short, sweet, and right to the point. It's happy, sad, and full of hope. |
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