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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Time He stares out of the window, but he doesn't really see. He remembers the days when he was wild and free. In his mind, it is not spring. In his eyes, he is lost. On his face, there is no smile. On his heart, there is frost. He sits in a chair as life slowly passes by. The only sound you will hear is a sorrowful sigh. His bones are weak. His body is cold. Time has gone... and made him old. --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Don't know what I can say, except well done. Thank you for posting this, Tenessee Angel. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
TA* This is a touching piece, I had a vision of my grandfather while I read this, he died a mere shadow of his former self, so sad to watch someone so strong fade. You are on a roll girl! Thank you once again for sharing your gift of weave~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TennesseeAngel~ Such a sweet, yet sad, recall. Well done, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
WOW, This is really well written. I will definately be looking for more of your work. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Tennessee Angel, This is a sad, but delicately written piece...liked the writing... regards, sudhir |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written Angel. I enjoyed your poem. |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Thank you everyone for your kind remarks. Everyone here has been so welcoming and so supportive. It is so nice to have a place where so many people understand this uncontrollable urge I have to write. And it's nice to have people like you, Marge, that understand that the urge usually hits when the rest of the world is asleep. Thank you all!!!!! --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
TA, So sad and touching. Reminds me of my grandfather when he died. Had alzheimer's and didn;t even know any of us. Brought tears to me eyes just reading this. Very sweet. Great writing. LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
TA~ Tender writings sad and touching piece well written Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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