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Angel`Fox Junior Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 32Ottawa, Ontario Canada |
Journey I am on this journey called life, All alone for so long , despair sets in Don't know anything else Curls up in bed alone and cold Cry all night from loneliness Is this what faith intended for me? Is this my destiny? When will this ever end? Will I find that special soul? My soul for him and his for me Could this happen to me? Yes!! Weeeeeeeee I found my missing link I found my soul mate I found the love of my life Needed to learn a few lessons Before faith brought us together Now destiny is pushing us forward Telling us be happy and live in bliss As you do deserve this happiness Forever and ever and beyond eternity Angel`Fox June 20, 2000 11:47am @}>*+~^ Angel`Fox ^~+*<{@ {~._.~} _( Y )_ ()~*~() (_)-(_) "Love seeketh not itself to please Nor for itself hath any care, But for another gives its ease, And builds a heaven in hell's despair" |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
great poem and the two parts play a major role in the trun out of the story i love it never the less can't wait to read more of your work. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Its always great to read a love story and you did it so well |
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Angel`Fox Junior Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 32Ottawa, Ontario Canada |
Thank you both Jeremiah and Paula  )@}>*+~^ Angel`Fox ^~+*<{@ {~._.~} _( Y )_ ()~*~() (_)-(_) "Love seeketh not itself to please Nor for itself hath any care, But for another gives its ease, And builds a heaven in hell's despair" |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Congratulations for writing this beautiful poem and for finding your soulmate, I'm so glad that there was a happy ending that replaced the despair in this piece  Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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