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To YOU my friend
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To YOU my friend |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
A gentle touch I offer you now To clear the stress that your body holds A radiant smile I give you now To bring all the cheers for today and years to come A strong hand I hold you now To keep away from all the sinful things A vow I've just made now To be a friend forever A friend to share your pain To share your smiles To witness all strides you make in life To love you forever I would like our days to be peaceful No more distrust and pain I just want YOU to believe That my love for you will never end In difficulties it will never bend Hope we're always together thoroughout the end Sincerely A_L |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
A_L~ very touching!  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Thank you SEA. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i love poem at your best A_L just love it. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
I just want YOU to believe That my love for you will never end In difficulties it will never bend *sigh* Loved it! |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Thanks Jan..its entirely what I think and believe...I dont really know whats in her but I belive that I always have a friend in her...no matter who she choses to love. Sincerely A_L |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
AL, This is so touching and sweet! Your friend and you are both very lucky! Take care, amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Amazon_Lover, Great poem!! Though I would tend to think that being a friend forever is but a dream, great poem nontheless. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
amazon-a nice piece, that all friendships could have your perspective, their quality would be emmense. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A gentle touch I offer you now To clear the stress that your body holds A radiant smile I give you now To bring all the cheers for today and years to come A strong hand I hold you now To keep away from all the sinful things A vow I've just made now To be a friend forever A friend to share your pain To share your smiles To witness all strides you make in life To love you forever ---------------- perfect!!!!!!! wow this is a heartwarming declaration AL very very sweetly expressed... love those first two lines & 5-6 wow jm |
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