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| Open Poetry #8 |
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Tidal Wave Of Emotion |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Tidal Wave Of Emotion ~*Marge Tindal*~ You won't know love until you've cried an ocean of tears until a tidal wave of emotion has picked you up slamming you on the shore time and time again then receded leaving you lying there helpless and alone You will know love when the waves gently lap at your toes teasing you pleasing you inviting you to take the plunge again ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Marge, this is super!! Love and hugs, Lil' Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I love this Marge! I know the feeling of being slamed against the shore all to well. Take care!< !signature--> God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown [This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 06-20-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
To take the plunge again.... WOW, breathtaking viewpoint portrayed here... Marge, this is exquisite... regards, sudhir |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Outstanding Marge! Wonderful perspective, I love the angle you've portrayed this from ... beautiful and oh so true! Best wishes, /Kit |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
oooh I agree totally! I like! I like! ~Heather |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Marge, What a perfectly sweet description of love....This is great. Bonnie |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ the ocean.... tied into emotions....this is fantastic!  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
After reading One Sip of You, I had to take a look when I saw your name. Wonderful, made me wish for a dip in the sea! |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Marge, this is beautiful! I really enjoyed it! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lil' Lizzie~ Thank you, honey. You're just always here to give me a smile. I appreciate you. EagleOne~ So glad you enjoyed. Maybe it's time to tip-toe to the water's edge ? Sudhir~ So glad you enjoyed. I look forward to your comments. Kit~ Thanks for your comments. I'm always interested in your perceptions of what I pen. XAngel~ LOL ! Love your enthusiasm. SEA~ Seems logical ... moving in and out and then returning .... love those tide changes ! Jan~ Thank you for the 'double' compliment. I greatly appreciate what you say. LoveBug~ Thank you so very, very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is such wonderful piece Marge and it shows how well your state of mind operates. Thanks for sharing! Nathan |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Marge~ This is such a wonderful poem. Truly enjoyed it. ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nate~ Oh, my friend ... I always enjoy just knowing you've read something I've written. Thanks so much. Lorraine~ I am truly pleased that you liked it so much. Thank you for letting me know. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Those emotions are so strong they are like great tidal waves. What a great metaphor to describe these deep rooted waves of love we ride on to the crest until that tidal wave sweeps us to shore again.....Great poem! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Your words wash over my heart like a tidal wave. This so beautiful. I just love the hope at the end of it all....sigh. Great writing here my friend. LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
This was great, Marge! It can be so scary to take the plunge again. But those who let fear bind them are left standing on the shore alone. Better to take the risk and jump in with both feet...He who hesitates is lost. Wonderful work!! --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Wonderful Marge!! This is exactly what it is! The tidal wave effect, my goodness but you can write, everytime I read one of yours I remember again why I started posting here... such amazing poets sharing life within a beautiful weave~ |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Marge-Another exquisite piece and I know I've ridden that wave and drowned asunder on more than one occasion. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I thought that I knew love But it must have been a fake. I didn't cry an ocean It was only just a lake. Then I was sure that I knew love And all it could deliver But once again I erred Because I only cried a river. I have cried creeks and ponds and such Due to misplaced emotion But I have never had the chance To cry an entire ocean. I've always hoped that someday true love Might happen along But now I see I have no chance... My tear ducts ain't that strong!!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ Thanks for catching the wave of emotion. LoneWolf~ Your heart plays in the surf .... awash with love. TennesseeAngel~ Let's go to the beach ! ButterfliesDC~ What a sweet reply. Thank you. Gemini~ Ahhhhh ... but the lifeguard is on duty. Thank you, hon. Balladeer~ You can cry me a river Cry me a lake How many teardrops does it take ? If your little heart is really in a muddle ... You can cry me a teensy little puddle. You can 'cry me a river cry me a river I'd cry a river over you !'  Love ya' .... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh how true these words of yours Marge Emotions are like a huge tidal wave, we go crashing down and we are in pieces yet we pick them up and start all over not knowing when the next wave is going to hit. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Yeah, gal ... you got that exactly right. Thanks for the read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
...and that's the truth! Well done, Marge! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Thanks for the read, my friend. Let's go splashing in the surf ! You game ? Me too ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi sweet Marge--what a wonderful waterfilled poem of perfection you have written! |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Marge, this is superb! What a great metaphor to use, too. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Marge, anything i say here, no matter how sweet and generous they may sound will not do justice to this poem...liked it as always and rest assured i will now look out for your poetry |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Marge... as usual, there is nothing I can say that hasn't been said twice now, but this is truly beautiful. So much truth, short and to the point and filled with wisdom. Excellent  Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Thanks, gal. It's just kind of a 'wet' thang ! Elizabeth~ I do thank you lots. Kaile~ Thanks, hon. I hope you enjoy all you find. Thunder~ Well, you did just fine ! Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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