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Never me |
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Allstaria22 Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 83MN USA |
when I see you standing there wondering if I could be her I try so hard not to change myself into what you're sure to want because if I change myself for you I'll loose myself somewhere in the darkness then try to convince myself that you love me for me but some how I'll know deep down in my soul the one that was ment for you was never me. Isaiah 1:18 "Everyone loves a rose, will you be thankful for the thorns?" |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
great job i lov ethe ending its a love story about oneself and the love you hold for yourself I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Allstaria22... I kiss your hand for being this honest and sincere to others with something as delicate as Love, as I have experienced falling in Love with an "act" of the real person who was too scared to show herself. I've often talked about this same thing with close friends, but never seen it addressed by a woman in such a way. I automatically have a mountain of respect for you by reading this fine piece. Stay real always my friend, because if you dont show yourself for who you really are... "you" can never be loved. By doing this we would be cheating the other AND ourselves out of true Love. Beautiful job, Outstanding message  Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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