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She's Beautiful. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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She's beautiful Not because she's on a magazine cover But because like her there's no other She's beautiful Not because she has her own make-up line But because her ways are so sweetly sublime She's beautiful Not because she can, with style walk the walk But because she can, with style talk the talk She's beautiful. . . . . . Just because -------------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
*sniff* aww Sven this was super sweet. If only all men treated/felt about women as such (or at least had the nerve to say the words and let us know how they feel) *SIGH* <--big one IRL  ~Heather [This message has been edited by X Angel (edited 06-20-2000).] |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
How sweet and touching...liked this one alot  Julie :) |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
You know how to make ladies happy, don't you??? Another very nice poem from you, Sven... regards, sudhir |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is wonderful and very sweet, I liked it alot , nicely written Sven  |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Beauty is a in the eyes of the beholder. A very sweet poem indeed. Marina |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
where have you been my sveetie Sven? ah...never mind...I can guess...applause again... |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You been seeing Maybelline again? LOL Lovely sir!  |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Aw man, why didn't you pause! I really enjoyed the poem, I just hope that you'll add the rest in the future!! Nice poem and thanks for sharing!! Nathan |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
wonderfully romantic. beautiful poem. < !signature--> ------------------------ "We Irish are too poetic to be poets, we are a nation of brilliant failures." Oscar Wilde A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 06-20-2000).] |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Sweet and lovely...I really enjoyed this one of yours, Sven! ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sven~ as always beautiful! lovely poem you have here friend. with respect and admiration, amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Right on! It's hard to put into words exactly, so you did a great job of bringing concept of beauty to every mind. Very enjoyable, loved reading it. |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Ah, this was beautiful! It's a wonderful thing to be loved 'just because'. Great Job!! --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Beautiful poem, Sven. As I'm sure you know, true beauty always comes from within. Wonderful writing here, my friend. LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Beautiful my friend. You seem to know just what to say all the time, and have something to write about. "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all my friends. . . Heather, most men do, I'm sure. . . and if you don't guys. . . tell Heather that she's beautiful!! Julie, thank you, glad you liked it. . . Sudhir, please!!! I just say what comes naturally. . . it's all I know. . . whiskey, thank you very much. . . Marina, yes it is. . . if only we could behold ourselves as others do. . . thank you my friend. . . serenity, I've been right here. . . where have you been?? Can you read my mind?? deVine, no, I haven't been dating Maybelline again. . .but I have been seeing Max Factor!! LOL  Nate, glad you enjoyed it, but why do you think that there's more?? Brian, thank you my friend. . . Lorraine, thank you also!! Aimster, thank you so much. . .but, you're making me blush over here. . .  ethome, thanks, it's hard to talk about a concept of beauty, but I try. . . TA, yes it is, isn't it?? If only we all could love like that. . . LW, I do know that. . . that's where I was going with this. . . thanks!! DE, just going with what I know. . . thanks!! ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sven, I can't believe that I missed this gem! Where have I been?! What a beautiful heart you have to proclaim that it is a woman's inner beauty that makes her beautiful and not all the makeup and superficial masks that she wears. I loved this! Well written! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
Sven- This is truly sweet. Where do they "grow" men that think like you do?? LOL Great poem my friend! love & all, -Holly |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This poem is beautiful Sven ... just ... because ... I loved your thoughts here! Best wishes, /Kit |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Sven, as usual, what you write is beautiful!! I really liked this one kat |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I am glad this one came back. In my opinion, you should submit it for the book. You write beautifully and from the heart, my friend. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . Melissa, I don't know how you missed this one either!! But thank you for bringing it back. . .Holly, Michigan!! LOL But seriously, thanks for your reply. . .Kit, thank you. . . Kat, thank you too!! Marina, thank you. . .I may take you up on that my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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