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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Do not tell me that you love me, 'cause to me it's just a word. I want to hear something that no one else has ever heard. Do not promise me the moon 'til you can put it in my hand. Do not offer me the world 'cause I know it's not that grand. Do not swear you'll stay a lifetime unless you really mean to stay. Do not try to hold me down or I'll just up and fly away. --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~WooHoo,..damn straight!!! Right on. This is full of strength...love it. *Peace. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Great work, Tennessee Angel. And as SpitFire said, it is very strong. I enjoyed. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I love this TA!! they are all just words until there is something to go with them. Short and to the heart. Well done with much Class....Fly girl Fly!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very COOL poem T-angel VERY COOL loved the strength in this yet laced with a longing for honest love great writing jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving (How one move just puts me by myself) There you go just trusting someone else (Now I know I put us both through hell) ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong (I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me) And I'm not sayin (We ever had the right to hold on) (I just didn't wanna let you get away from me) ~MB20~ She says baby, It's 3AM ... I must be lonely, When she says baby, Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes, Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it. ~MB20~ |
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