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Forever and a Day
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Forever and a Day |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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Last night I lay beside you Watching as you slept Trying to see inside you Through tears that I had wept You said a lot to me While lying silent still And now I know you see The way, my soul you fill The love I have discovered Will never leave my heart The man that you uncovered Has loved you from the start And I know I told you never But I have to leave today Still I’ll wait for you forever If Forever and a day |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
How sweet, Kevin, and how sad at the ending. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Kevin~ this was both touching and sad. the last line brought a tear to my eye. beautiful dear friend. beautiful! take care. amy  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
*sigh* how lovely and sad...wow wonderful piece of work Kev! ~Heather |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~How honest and sweet this poem is. Just lovely. Take care. *Peace. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Very well penned indeed Kevin. How does one so young have such talent!!!! Marina It is blessing to have wings for your words, and ink to flow from pen. Marina Crossley |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
you have an excellent meter on this one! Kathleen "How do I love thee? Let me count the ways. I love thee to the depth and breadth and height My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight For the ends of Being and ideal Grace." Elizabeth Barrett Browning |
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