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Love's Potion
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Love's Potion |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Love's Potion In love's purity The brush of fingertips says we care In sync and fused, the perfect pair Souls to each other we bare In love's lust Our bodies erotically entwined Shameless soft skin, are ties that bind Making love with heart,soul and mind In love's heart We feel but one emotion Two fools, adrift out on the ocean Since having drunk love's potion Marina June 2000 [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 06-12-2000).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Marina a passionate and beautiful poem. hot very hot. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. manic street preachers "Culture Alienation Borebom and Despair" "I know I believe in nothing but it is my nothing" -faster MSP "And you see, I kind of shiver to conformity Did you see, the way I cower to authority, you see And my life, it's a series of compromises anyway It's a sham, and I'm conditioned to accept it all, you see" six by Paul Draper. ----- |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"We feel but one emotion." This is the love that I want. I was thinking yesterday that I keep telling a certain woman I love her and she tells me she loves me...but we haven't even built a solid friendship yet. I need to start asking her things like how is her mother and her daughter...and is their anyway I can help her as a friend. James |
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Martinque Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 69 |
This was very sweet. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Drinking the old Captain Morgan love potion again eh.... The old spell book not working agina...lol |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written. Me liked. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
love ya when your lusty marina-girl save some of that potion for me... I gotta find me a poet to drink up *smile* very nice writing my poetic girlie girl very nice indeed later-lust-gator jm And it's good that I'm not angry, I just need to get over, I'm not angry, anymore Cry when you cry, run when you run, love when you love, represent the ashes that you leave behind ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Have you been in my recipe book again Marina??  This is a wonderful poem. . . full of passion and desire. . . said in just a few words. . . "In love's heart We feel but one emotion Two fools, adrift out on the ocean Since having drunk love's potion" Just wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
So much said in so few words Marina ... this was delightfully romantic, lovely poem! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Brian, thank you. I will meet you in adult.  James, relax and just let nature take Its course. She will see just what she has in you in time. I have always seen it. Martinque,thank you James, Captian Morgan's? You know I prefer red wine. And as for my spell book, well..I could tell you......but then I would have to kill you!  Mike, thank you very much. I am glad you liked it.  Jan, you don't need a poet to drink up the magic potion. You and me are heading to pick up some sailors in adult! Sven thank you for your compliment, but, I believe the spell book is mine!!! Kit, thank you. I always enjoy your posts. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hi Marina, I had to go back to page 10 to find this and get your e-mail address. I did talk to Lena and I did ask her about her mother and her daughter and some friendship kind of things...I am making some progress...I am so excited. James |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Glad to hear it James! Got the email and sent one back to you.... Marina |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
marina~ girl this was beautiful and very passionate. such flames of romance you have kindled in this one. very nice friend, very nice! take care. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Amy, thank you. Marina It is blessing to have wings for your words, and ink to flow from pen. Marina Crossley |
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