Open Poetry #8 |
Love |
UNC STAR Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 67Hinesville,Ga,USA |
As the rain falls and the thunder rolls Inside myself I feel very bold and I ask myself things never before like what must I do to open your heart and even ask why are we so far apart but maybe these things I need not to know as the rain falls and the thunder rolls. To me you are so special and you mean so much and i get the chills by your slightest touch you are my heart, soul, and fire, my sole desire and as long as I'm with you our love love will grow higher and these are the things that you need to know as the rain falls and the thunder rolls. By: Jamie Sharp |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
I love a good romance. Well written. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is sooo sweet!! ME likes!! Welcome to Passions!! Bridgette "Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
very good....welcome to passions, liked your poem. Julie :) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Enjoyed this, and look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email for a special welcome! |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
hi again you've asked some questions..only time will answer...its painful whenever you're away..so many things will happen out of your control..somethings which you can never imagine or think of...I guess its destiny..difficult to predict or control.. take care. Sincerely A_L |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
UNC STAR~ Enjoyed your poem! Looking forward to reading more. Welcome to Passions! ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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