Open Poetry #8 |
Faith |
Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Faith The sun is shining the sky is blue, somethings in the air which does not ring true. It seems like everything is calm, but in my heart rings an alarm. "Your dark angel was by your side, I chased him away he will abide." "Say your prayers do not yield, keep the faith I will be your shield." "I will be with you to wipe away the sorrows, I will be with you for all tomorrows." A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
..it's all about keeping the faith..loved the poem. "i lie in the soil and fertilize mushrooms leaking out gas fumes are made into perfume. you can't fire me because i already quit throw me in the fi |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Oh this is sweet, Lorraine ~netswan |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Your dark angel was by your side, I chased him away he will abide." that is gorgeous.... nice work! |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
anomaly~ Thank you for reading. netswan~ Thank you much. Severn~ Thank you for your nice reply. ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A sweet poem here, Lorraine, KEEP THE FAITH....how I remember that Bon Jovi number... Like this one for sure. Regards, sudhir |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Sudhir~ Thank you for your nice words! I have 3 of Bon Jovi's CDs but no Keep the Faith. Would you happen to know what CD this song is on? ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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