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Open Poetry #8

As time goes bye

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2000-06-18 03:45 PM

As I look out this window
   Watching, waiting
   As time goes bye
   Hoping for a chance
    To take my ride
      Along side
The other clocks ticking
    As time goes bye

I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2000-06-18 04:09 PM

Jeremiah,

Short and sweet!! Love it!!

Lone Wolf

Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

2 posted 2000-06-23 11:58 PM

interesting play on the words "bye" and "by"...creative work here

felt the agony and helplessness of waiting and the doubt of whether this wait is going to be worthwhile

a beauty as always

keep posting

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

3 posted 2001-03-16 04:06 PM

Short, but wonderful!! You seem to have a way with words. Hehehe luv ya man!

Jenn

"I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-01-06 04:24 AM

well done!

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