Open Poetry #8 |
That Word |
ynotme? Junior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 17 |
WHAT'S IN A WORD? What's in a word? Some would ask. How much can just one word mean? Can it change your life? Can it heal your wounds? Can it make sense of where you have been? Can one word really achieve all this? Can it really mean more than a touch or a kiss? I would understand if you told me "No"! But it all depends on the seeds we sow. Sometimes a speech of a thouzand words Can come to nought If the story is told With a lack of feeling Of love Of care Then the listener will be left cold But sometimes Just sometimes One word means more Than all the speeches You've heard before Sometimes one word Can warm your heart Can reach your soul And every part Of your body and mind Your senses reel A tingle you feel As true love you find What kind of word Can achieve all this? Can bring you happiness Joy and bliss? Which word indeed! I must confess It's only small That word is YES! |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Welcome to Passions, ynotme. Good work here! Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
ynotme, Welcome to Passions!! Nice writing here!! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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notlikely2 Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 308UK |
Nice words.....are you still as happy as when you wrote this? Love is like the measles.....the older you are, the harder it hits you! |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
very good poem ynotme....Welcome to Passions, I haven't been here long and I am already ADDICTED!!!! You'll love it!! Julie :) |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful poem , Welcome to passions |
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ynotme? Junior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 17 |
Thank you all for your kind words. I really appreciate the fact that others have taken the time to read my writing. This is a very friendly place......I like it! |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
I like this very much very powerful and provocative, words are the chains that bind us all together Thanks for sharing this with me Olias |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
Welcome to passions good work here love the Yes and No i reminded me of when i was a kid thanks. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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