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A Walk To Peace
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A Walk To Peace |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Rise Mocking Sun Hellish Day Begun Mind Asking Why Refusing To Cry Cloaked In Pain Calling The Rain Cleanse My Soul Fill Me Whole Rise Loving Moon Silver Stars Loom Day’s Torment Done Peaceful Walk Begun |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I like the style of this one... and you have used some excellent imagery here...  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
lots of butterfly slippers *smile* well this just DRIPS with ache me SS beautiful and cryptic in a haunted sort of way... I like seeing you try a new "style" always need new ways to PURGE ... you know ... I know ... feel better baby...please  love ya jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving (How one move just puts me by myself) There you go just trusting someone else (Now I know I put us both through hell) ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong (I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me) And I'm not sayin (We ever had the right to hold on) (I just didn't wanna let you get away from me) ~MB20~ She says baby, It's 3AM ... I must be lonely, When she says baby, Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes, Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it. ~MB20~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
BDC, Great writing my friend. Short and sweet. Love your imagery here. Very nice. You say it so well... **HUGS** LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
wonderful writings sweet butterflies lovely imagery and layout Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Butterfly - this is well done. Sad, but done with such style ~netswan |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"Peaceful Walk Begun" Indeed, a peaceful stroll through dreams and night's release. Wonderful work here, butterfly! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Day’s Torment Done Peaceful Walk Begun wonderfully written Butterflies. Especially love the last two lines, it is strange how hard it can be to start that "Peaceful Walk" but the effort is always worth it. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. "Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso "We Irish are too poetical to be poets, we are a nation of brilliant failures" Oscar Wilde ----- |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Like the song says "what a difference a day makes, twenty-four hours of your time." Nice style and nice touch. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This says alot in so few words. I love it! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Wonderfully written... Enjoyed this one Regards, sudhir |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Thank you all so much, I wasn't sure if I was going to share this one or not...now I'm very glad I did, to touch one person or to make one person feel that they are not alone makes all the difference in the world to me. Thank you so much! |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
I didn't have any new comments to add--I just want to add my voice to all of those who loved your poem. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I will "FOREVER" love you!!! |
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