Open Poetry #8 |
For The Second Time |
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
For The Second Time I looked in the mirror today and saw you looking back; saw the green of your eyes, your smile, the wondeful glow of your skin. The mirror fogged from the water I'd run… Oh God, I've lost you again. W. James Beard, Jr. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
strong emotions and imagery written well in a few perfect words... softly haunting take care JW jm |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
You have conveyed such a strong feeling in so few words. It's great. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wow. Full of impact - just as I like them! |
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