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Slashed soul Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 86England |
Stranger! you will never know the passion and love that I can show to you I am just a face others I take them beyond time and space. Fall in deeply drown gently in my arms Give into my many charms forever my lover eternally your sin Give me your heart I'll begin. Climb with me to the highest heights sink with me to the deepest depths A single kiss from my lips will take away your breath. The story begins my love never ends I'll give an addiction one without a cure for once tasted you will never be sure. Open your mind let me feel your pain once tasted, you will never be the same for I am your vice your wildest dream come true all contained within you. -Rich- -someday, somewhere I will find love. [This message has been edited by Slashed soul (edited 06-18-2000).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Who could resist a poem like this? Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
rich, and what a lucky lady she shall be. this was beautifully expressed hon. take care. amy  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful and very confident. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Rich A wonderful read, expressingly bold  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Lovely Rich ---- I see you are submitting to have your poem in the book -- Great Poem --- ~netswan |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You keep writing poems with that kind of passion you are bound to find someone to love you. I think it's written somewhere you can't lose. |
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dreamy_eyes Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 67 |
How can any poem compair with this one? Debs  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Rich, Lovely poem this... liked this part... The story begins my love never ends I'll give an addiction one without a cure for once tasted you will never be sure. ... by the way how much star trek do you like... BORG love, so fertile, Do not resist temptation, For resistance is FUTILE, Robotic trek of imagination... duh??? wrong theme, but well, I smile my way out of embarassment regards, sudhir Resistance |
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Slashed soul Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 86England |
I thank you all from the bottom of my heart, you are all indeed good friends, and I hope my writings touch something in all of you, I enjoy reading all your poetry as I frequently do. Thanks again! Rich |
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Michaela New Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 1 |
Rich, this poem means a lot of me. Danke!!! Your rose... |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
*phew* this was awesome! ~Heather |
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Eskendale Junior Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 17 |
I stop by and find myself a delight! Thank you for a confession of love... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Rich~ WOW...with a sales pitch like that what woman in her right mind could resist!! This is a breathtaking weave my friend!! By the way...Shane's mother is being tested for a living transplant, she'll give Shane 1/2 of her liver if all the tests are a match I will let you know what the outcome is, I thought you might want to know |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
There is nothing like a confident guy. You'd of had me in a minute. |
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Slashed soul Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 86England |
Well - I dont know what to say, apart from thank you to every one of you! - you have all made me smile you are all wonderful!!!! -Rich- |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Wonderful expression Coco |
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